All right, managed to read all the chapters (first half last night and second half this morning), and I have to say I really like this a lot! I thought you did nicely showing how Havoc and Rebecca's relationship developed. Quite a twist of turns there indeed, haha. Some quick thoughts:
-Really liking the idea of Roy having Havoc doing phone tagging at the moment. Have you read sonjajade's Caught Up? It's an awesome ficlet of Havoc doing phone tagging during the Promised Day. I bet you'll love it. :)
-Hahaha like the twist of Roy and Riza actually married a month after the Promised Day and them having a child. As for Grumman and Christmas... oh gawds, don't want to think about that either. @_@
-You really like twins, huh? XD *still remembers the Roy/Riza story I did for your b-day* I like the name Rachel. However, poor Jack. :<
Overall enjoyed this very much. Please finish this soon! I want to know if Jack's going to live. D:
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-Really liking the idea of Roy having Havoc doing phone tagging at the moment. Have you read sonjajade's Caught Up? It's an awesome ficlet of Havoc doing phone tagging during the Promised Day. I bet you'll love it. :)
-Hahaha like the twist of Roy and Riza actually married a month after the Promised Day and them having a child. As for Grumman and Christmas... oh gawds, don't want to think about that either. @_@
-You really like twins, huh? XD *still remembers the Roy/Riza story I did for your b-day* I like the name Rachel. However, poor Jack.
:<
Overall enjoyed this very much. Please finish this soon! I want to know if Jack's going to live. D:
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