Comments | seaweed_fma: The Bet: Part 2 of 2 (Babysitting!Mustang)

seaweed_fma

The Bet: Part 2 of 2 (Babysitting!Mustang)

Feb 05, 2007 11:10

Title: The Bet (Part Two ( Read more... )

elysia hughes, fma_fuh_q, multi-chapter fic, roy x hughes, roy mustang, fan fiction, hughes x gracia, maes hughes, the bet, gracia hughes, fullmetal alchemist

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seaweed_fma February 22 2007, 16:02:17 UTC

Hehe, thanks. I could see Hughes being overprotective like that! It is his little girl, after all!

lmd_84 February 5 2007, 23:51:41 UTC

That was so cute! I loved how Roy was practically pleading for a reason to stay behind, but when he got to the baby-sitting "his heart melted just a little". And who's wouldn't, with how you wrote Elysia so adorably? That was very sweet, along with Maes's little asides to Roy; "Mmm.. A shame I can't keep undressing you!" - which manages to be cute and kind of sexy. One *minor* spelling correction. After that line, it should be "Maes nonchalantly said", not 'nonchalanly'. You only missed the 't', so I hope you don't mind me going pedantic on you.

I'll save this and the one before it ("now, what do I file these under 'Slash - NC-17 or 'Gen'?")Some lovely fluff, there.

seaweed_fma February 22 2007, 16:04:18 UTC

Awww.. thanks for saving it. It is nice to know my fics are good enough that people really like them. It was easier to write Elysia than I thought it would be. I was worried when I started, and for once Hughes is the horn-dog, *NOT* Roy!! LOL

lmd_84 February 22 2007, 16:11:01 UTC

*headdesk*. There was me pickily correcting your spelling, and my punctuation was off in that comment. It was meant to be 'whose' not 'who's'.

Horn-dog? That's a new one....LOL. Hughes' manner here rather fits him, though. Combining being reminded of this fic with cornerofmadness's flipping gorgeous 'Homecoming' (it's a lovely Hughes/Gracia....with a twist) makes me want to write about Hughes. Specifically it makes me want to write smut (!). Darn. I *can't* write smut.

seaweed_fma February 22 2007, 16:19:14 UTC

Yes you can write smut! Just give it a try.. I wasnt sure if I could, till I tried.. that is the only way you will know.. And dont worry about the spelling thing. everyone in my family is an atoricious speller, I took no offense.
Come on... *tempt tempt* write some Hughes Pr0n!!!!!!

And good god do I love that Homecoming fic!! OOOH!

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