That was so cute! I loved how Roy was practically pleading for a reason to stay behind, but when he got to the baby-sitting "his heart melted just a little". And who's wouldn't, with how you wrote Elysia so adorably? That was very sweet, along with Maes's little asides to Roy; "Mmm.. A shame I can't keep undressing you!" - which manages to be cute and kind of sexy. One *minor* spelling correction. After that line, it should be "Maes nonchalantly said", not 'nonchalanly'. You only missed the 't', so I hope you don't mind me going pedantic on you.
I'll save this and the one before it ("now, what do I file these under 'Slash - NC-17 or 'Gen'?")Some lovely fluff, there.
Awww.. thanks for saving it. It is nice to know my fics are good enough that people really like them. It was easier to write Elysia than I thought it would be. I was worried when I started, and for once Hughes is the horn-dog, *NOT* Roy!! LOL
*headdesk*. There was me pickily correcting your spelling, and my punctuation was off in that comment. It was meant to be 'whose' not 'who's'.
Horn-dog? That's a new one....LOL. Hughes' manner here rather fits him, though. Combining being reminded of this fic with cornerofmadness's flipping gorgeous 'Homecoming' (it's a lovely Hughes/Gracia....with a twist) makes me want to write about Hughes. Specifically it makes me want to write smut (!). Darn. I *can't* write smut.
Yes you can write smut! Just give it a try.. I wasnt sure if I could, till I tried.. that is the only way you will know.. And dont worry about the spelling thing. everyone in my family is an atoricious speller, I took no offense. Come on... *tempt tempt* write some Hughes Pr0n!!!!!!
And good god do I love that Homecoming fic!! OOOH!
Considering half the time I have trouble visualising just what's going on in the average NC-17 yaoi....most of my smut 'fic' stays in my head. Late at night. And thus proving that I am a creepy voyeuristic lady when it comes to fictional people and 'teh sex'. Though I am slightly alarmed with myself when I come up with scenarios that I've *definitely* not read in fanfic.
Meh....you're beginning to persuade me. I'll give a go at writing pr0n tonight. Maybe.
"And good god do I love that Homecoming fic!! OOOH!" Ain't it just f-ing hot? And the chocolate...Kinky, would-be Mrs Hughes, kinky.
Being as I think it is manga!canon (?) that she works or worked in a candy shop, it would make sense.. She seems so... vanilla (pardon the pun) that is seems wierd to think of her as kinky, but chocolate.. Ooohh :) Anyways, if you want me to help, if you write some pr0n tonight, you want me to be your beta? I am more than willing to help. Come on.. dooooo iiiiit.. you know you wanna!
I'll save this and the one before it ("now, what do I file these under 'Slash - NC-17 or 'Gen'?")Some lovely fluff, there.
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Horn-dog? That's a new one....LOL. Hughes' manner here rather fits him, though. Combining being reminded of this fic with cornerofmadness's flipping gorgeous 'Homecoming' (it's a lovely Hughes/Gracia....with a twist) makes me want to write about Hughes. Specifically it makes me want to write smut (!). Darn. I *can't* write smut.
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Come on... *tempt tempt* write some Hughes Pr0n!!!!!!
And good god do I love that Homecoming fic!! OOOH!
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Meh....you're beginning to persuade me. I'll give a go at writing pr0n tonight. Maybe.
"And good god do I love that Homecoming fic!! OOOH!"
Ain't it just f-ing hot? And the chocolate...Kinky, would-be Mrs Hughes, kinky.
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Anyways, if you want me to help, if you write some pr0n tonight, you want me to be your beta? I am more than willing to help.
Come on.. dooooo iiiiit.. you know you wanna!
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