Fic: "Bed Wrinkles In Time" (1/1)

May 11, 2015 16:45

Just a short ficlet from me today. I took a bit of a risk with the decidedly unsexy subject matter; I hope you like it anyway. :)

Bed Wrinkles In TimeBy: caia ( Read more... )

form: fic, rating: other, era: post-series, creator: thisficklemob

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kikimay May 11 2015, 21:52:16 UTC
Aww, adorable. I like the idea of established relationship Spuffy with older Buffy and immortal Spike. Actually that would be a kickass endgame for them.

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thisficklemob May 12 2015, 00:56:26 UTC
I like it too. I've seen a lot of her dying of old age fics, less just... being middle aged.

Thanks!

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red_satin_doll May 12 2015, 02:36:38 UTC
Long experience had taught him that his Slayer was a vault when it came to matters she didn't want to discuss.

Lovely description and perfect for both of them. This fic made me smile; the tone of the relationship feels just right.

You're right, there are far fewer middle aged tics (Barb is one of the few to focus on that time period I think?)

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thisficklemob May 13 2015, 22:17:43 UTC
Thank you so much. :)

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torrilin May 11 2015, 22:24:00 UTC
Yay! Buffy getting older is one of my favorite things.

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thisficklemob May 12 2015, 00:56:50 UTC
Especially since she never thought she would. Thanks.

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rebcake May 11 2015, 22:32:44 UTC
she was more likely to settle into them if he just faced her head-on and let her thunk into him like a skiff running aground

Perfect language! Awwww. He's learned all her ways, and still is pleased to be her docking station for comfort, among other things.

when he felt cherished, it tended to make him feel amorous

Well, yes.

This is what I want for them! This whole thing is lovely from start to stop.

Edity bit: relationship had survived made the wrinkles conversation

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thisficklemob May 12 2015, 01:02:29 UTC
I have a not-so-secret weakness for head-thunking in fic. Barb had a great line for it once, "butted his shoulder like a disconsolate sheep." There's just something about the simpatico and comfort it suggests that I like.

Thanks very much!

And thanks for the edit.

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red_satin_doll May 12 2015, 02:37:18 UTC
and still is pleased to be her docking station for comfort, among other things.

Perfect description is perfect. :D

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thisficklemob May 13 2015, 22:19:05 UTC
(Stop outdoing me on my fic's comments, rebcake! ;) )

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slaymesoftly May 11 2015, 23:16:42 UTC
LOL Loved it. Real problems, real solutions. Spike made me smile.

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thisficklemob May 12 2015, 01:03:03 UTC
I'm glad. :)

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double_dutchess May 11 2015, 23:28:59 UTC
Loved it. Great ficlet!

"So, you're saying we might be on a deadline."

Ha!

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thisficklemob May 12 2015, 01:05:52 UTC
Thank you! I considered letting Spike go all serious about how her birthdays represented victories to him, but then decided he'd rather focus on something else. *g*

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