Continuing the Continuation!

[seachellestar]

LOL maybe we should just make a comm for this story XD

{Part One}
{Part Two}
{Part Three}
{Part Four}
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Comments

[pianointardis]

okay, now that was the strangest menos grande i have ever imagined!XD

Lol, well, i was thunking of someone else, but rose = good call! team awesome is comiing together!!!!

[seachellestar]

Its what a menos grande looks like! Srsly!! Well, the first one you see anyway, lol.

Well I also included the Kaiser Chiefs, since they sang "Oh my God, I can't believe it!", who were you thinking of?

[pianointardis]

really? a menos grande wears boots? i'm gonna have to look at it again!

lol, i never realised that! I was actually thinking of donna, she said that in partners in crime when she met the doctor again! I'll have to add her in in my paragraph!

[seachellestar]

YUS. It was scary, lol ;o;

well, "Oh my God I don't believe it" is a LITTLE generic, lol. The first thing I thought of was One Foot In The Grave, and I thought "...nah."

Bad continuity

[pianointardis]

Lol, i just has to point out your bad continuity here! sorry!

You wrote:
The Doctor turned to see who was yelling so loudly as to be heard over the sounds of burning buildings and people dying violently.

while I rote that everyone was celebrating with ewoks and gungans!

sorry to point this out, but the jump made me lul!

Re: Bad continuity

[seachellestar]

Just because some people are celebrating does not mean that there aren't still people in the process of dying, and the buildings would probably still be smouldering :p
Just like on new years, where everyone's going YAAAAY but little kids are screaming in terror.
So ha.