The sequel to "The second we are judged" because, well, Ryan has to raise Sophie and Seth has to make an appearance, right?
You know what I want..... I need to know why they aren't speaking and how Sophie is going to get better (because I expect things to work out for her....). Want to see Ryan happy...because he should always end up happy even though its fun to watch him squirm until the happiness comes.
Oh, there's a very good reason why they aren't speaking (and it's surprising that after all this time, I STILL REMEMBER IT!) and it's going to make sense and Ryan is going to be a pissed off (that seems to be my default Ryan as of late) and Seth is going to want to make up for everything that's lost. Because, well, in my head, after Sophie was taken, Seth just kept on with his life in RI, and then Kirsten got sick and she died, and he kept on with his classes and stuff, and then Sandy died and the only one left was Ryan, you know?
It's over here. It's kinda dark, in a way, but not really. Just. There's only actually Ryan there, and I had the idea of a sequel in my brain but I'm not sure I could actually write it, because. Man, like Whispering? The sequel to Yelling? That's one story that I'm sure I'll never be able to actually write. Because, man, Ryan was such a mess in my brain, after the whole Dart thing. Just. Yeah.
Yeah I can see how more of Yelling could be hard, Second is no where near as dark...at least in my mind.... I think Yelling is probably your darkest story and I felt sooooooo bad for him at the end. Not seeing a way for him to get out of that hole you dug for him there....but in Second while life sucks for everyone at the moment there is definately possibilities for the three of them to become happy. Sure Sandy and Kirsten are gone and Sophies life sucks at the moment...but the possibilities are there.....
God, I really don't think I could write the sequel to Yelling, even if I wanted to. All I can see in Ryan's near future is therapy and trying to get over it (blocking it) and it not helping and catching him at the worst times and... dude, horrible, all the way over. Always. God. I even had a scene stuck in my mind, where Kirsten had cleaned the bathroom with Pinesol and because that brought back memories (Dawn used to clean the bathroom back in the Dart house with Pinesol), just, the memory of it was so vivid that he ended up curled in the toilet throwing up.
SEE? ANGST! IT'S ALL ABOUT THE ANGST!!! *whimpers*
Yeah, Second ends up on happy note, in a way, because they found Sophie! God, I remember having the image of Ryan breaking down when Tony told him that they had found her, and that's pretty much the reason I wrote it, you know???
God, and now, I wanna write the sequel. *sticks tongue out*
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You know what I want..... I need to know why they aren't speaking and how Sophie is going to get better (because I expect things to work out for her....). Want to see Ryan happy...because he should always end up happy even though its fun to watch him squirm until the happiness comes.
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YES! I want him to be happy too!!! *g*
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It's over here. It's kinda dark, in a way, but not really. Just. There's only actually Ryan there, and I had the idea of a sequel in my brain but I'm not sure I could actually write it, because. Man, like Whispering? The sequel to Yelling? That's one story that I'm sure I'll never be able to actually write. Because, man, Ryan was such a mess in my brain, after the whole Dart thing. Just. Yeah.
*nods*
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SEE? ANGST! IT'S ALL ABOUT THE ANGST!!! *whimpers*
Yeah, Second ends up on happy note, in a way, because they found Sophie! God, I remember having the image of Ryan breaking down when Tony told him that they had found her, and that's pretty much the reason I wrote it, you know???
God, and now, I wanna write the sequel. *sticks tongue out*
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