It's over here. It's kinda dark, in a way, but not really. Just. There's only actually Ryan there, and I had the idea of a sequel in my brain but I'm not sure I could actually write it, because. Man, like Whispering? The sequel to Yelling? That's one story that I'm sure I'll never be able to actually write. Because, man, Ryan was such a mess in my brain, after the whole Dart thing. Just. Yeah.
Yeah I can see how more of Yelling could be hard, Second is no where near as dark...at least in my mind.... I think Yelling is probably your darkest story and I felt sooooooo bad for him at the end. Not seeing a way for him to get out of that hole you dug for him there....but in Second while life sucks for everyone at the moment there is definately possibilities for the three of them to become happy. Sure Sandy and Kirsten are gone and Sophies life sucks at the moment...but the possibilities are there.....
God, I really don't think I could write the sequel to Yelling, even if I wanted to. All I can see in Ryan's near future is therapy and trying to get over it (blocking it) and it not helping and catching him at the worst times and... dude, horrible, all the way over. Always. God. I even had a scene stuck in my mind, where Kirsten had cleaned the bathroom with Pinesol and because that brought back memories (Dawn used to clean the bathroom back in the Dart house with Pinesol), just, the memory of it was so vivid that he ended up curled in the toilet throwing up.
SEE? ANGST! IT'S ALL ABOUT THE ANGST!!! *whimpers*
Yeah, Second ends up on happy note, in a way, because they found Sophie! God, I remember having the image of Ryan breaking down when Tony told him that they had found her, and that's pretty much the reason I wrote it, you know???
God, and now, I wanna write the sequel. *sticks tongue out*
Yeah if your talking 50K words I can see 'second' being a little tough. I wouldn't expect it to be that involved unless you got into a lot of flashbacks and go reasonably far into the future. Then again thats not a bad thing. Summer has to get involved somehow to knock their heads together or something and that could take a while :)
Maybe the boys could end up acquiring a sibling for Sophie...... thats a whole story in itself...
As for the other story I can see a whole lot of story behind a divorce and a helping Ryan and eventually a daddy Ryan
I think I could write 50k, no problem, mostly because I can't write short to safe my life. However, just because I can write it, it doesn't mean I should. I mean, god, I could write a short sequel, no more than 10k and be happy with the result. It doesn't have to be NaNo worth, you know?
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It's over here. It's kinda dark, in a way, but not really. Just. There's only actually Ryan there, and I had the idea of a sequel in my brain but I'm not sure I could actually write it, because. Man, like Whispering? The sequel to Yelling? That's one story that I'm sure I'll never be able to actually write. Because, man, Ryan was such a mess in my brain, after the whole Dart thing. Just. Yeah.
*nods*
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SEE? ANGST! IT'S ALL ABOUT THE ANGST!!! *whimpers*
Yeah, Second ends up on happy note, in a way, because they found Sophie! God, I remember having the image of Ryan breaking down when Tony told him that they had found her, and that's pretty much the reason I wrote it, you know???
God, and now, I wanna write the sequel. *sticks tongue out*
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I figure if I keep dropping little tidbits the story will just have to come out sometime. Even if it's in bits and pieces.
Yeah can be evil that way.......
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YES, EVIL!!!
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Maybe the boys could end up acquiring a sibling for Sophie...... thats a whole story in itself...
As for the other story I can see a whole lot of story behind a divorce and a helping Ryan and eventually a daddy Ryan
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