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sdlucly

[oc] Shadowboxing. Chapter eight.

Jul 02, 2007 22:17

I said I would update! *bounces* Right now, I'm on a break. Totally deserved, too, I might add. *g* So, yeah, enjoy!

Title: Shadowboxing.
Author: M. F. Luder
Pairing: Ryan/Seth.
Rating: PG-13.
Category: Future fic. Drama. Me being evil. *nods*
Spoilers: Up to "The End's not Near, is Here", but with selective spoilers. *g*
Challenge: From fanfic100 and 45. ( Read more... )

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Comments 14

angelicrealism July 10 2007, 00:18:01 UTC

I just love your stories, I've said your attn to detail is amazing. And you're like the SR writer out there, you get them. All one needs to do is close their eyes while picturing your words and its as if we're seeing it play before our very eyes.
This story is so heartbreaking but moving at the same time.

sdlucly August 5 2007, 03:05:35 UTC

Thanks a lot. *g* This story really took a lot of me. I knew that, to make it justice, I had to make sure everything felt read, and so I ended up writing a lot more than I first planned to. *g*

Again, thanks a lot for your comment. I should be updating this story tomorrow. *g* Thanks!

60schic August 15 2007, 04:07:50 UTC

You loved Ch 7....I loved this one. You covered so much ground here, brought them so much further than you had before (and I mean emotionally, here) but of course there was the sex...TeeHee! So many good lines to quote:

But any collector knows that rare things, the ones that are really worth it, are the ones you must look and wait for ( ... )

sdlucly August 15 2007, 04:45:57 UTC

Chapter seven and this one need one another. They can't be good without one another. In chapter seven, Ryan breaks, and in this one, Seth picks him up. I love that. *nods*

It's polar opposite to "Look over here," yeah. *g* I went a bit overboard (not I ever not do that) on the angst, and loved every minute of it. If I was gonna go and break Ryan, I might as well do it with a bang, right? *g* I think I kinda did. *bounces*

"We've been doing this for the last six years", I think that's my favorite line of this story. It says so much about them, about their past and their future, I can't not love it. *g*

I tend to force Seth to grow up in my stories. I like my Seth to be one that cares for Ryan more than he could care for himself. Very not-canon, in a way. *g*

Thanks so much, babe. You know it means to world coming from you. *bounces*

60schic August 15 2007, 04:56:13 UTC

I'm saving Ch 9 until tomorrow.....