On the Fringe // Chapter Five

[xaefryl]

Title: On the Fringe
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Eventual!Luke/Percy, past!Percy/Annabeth. Also some OC pairings, but those are very minor.
Warnings: AU, slash (m/m and f/f). Spoilers for The Last Olympian. Also, there's a handful of OCs, but most of them are camp counselors with minor roles.
Author's Note: This fic completely changes Luke's fate in The

Comments

[xaefryl]

I try to keep update promises when I make them. :3

Yes, The Bronze Dragon. I thought it would be fitting to make a nod to that little side story, since it fits the Fourth of July theme this chapter. I shall do my best to have the next update done in less time than this one took. It might help if I actually started planning what I was doing instead of winging it.

[lexstorm]

What i think of this chap?
Well...it's kinda rude
Ok, it's super cool that Percy finally realizes that he's in love with Luke and even Luke is in love with him...
But...dunno this is pointing to a bad moment for Annabeth,...as i said ...rude.
But well, anyway i really liked the kiss between them, and if luke remember something or not he's trying fiercely to do things right with Percy, he even let Percy to do a life on his own without him, and that's really sweet, and add a romantic touch to the chap, so i just love it!
Oh i can't wait for the next one, which i expect not to take too long.

Good Luck!
Alex.

[xaefryl]

If you want to follow the fic, you should watch scribblesorbet, since my main account is just my regular everyday posts. The community is where the fics are all posted.

Thank you very much for commenting on the fic, though. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[jan_rea]

Oh GOD! I LOVE YOU!! Really, I really do. This new chapter is so awesomely brilliant that it actually exceeds expectations in any way imaginable. The way you wrote Percy and his conflict with Annabeth was realistic and true to his character and situation

[xaefryl]

:D Glad I exceed expectations. I'd hate to disappoint.

Oh, darn, I've been caught in my plan to kill my readers! Really, that was the only part of the chapter that was easy to write; kiss scenes always work out so smoothly for me but the moment anything gets dirtier than that *whoosh*! No sexy scene for you! DX Expect more kissing in later chapters, though. We'll see how far this fic goes.

You just know that Percy is going to have one heck of a time handling Luke and Annabeth. :3 Can't make things easy for him, now can I? I will try to have chapter seven done in a relatively decent amount of time, rather than the near month this chapter took me.

Thank you very much for your review! :D I appreciate it!

[jan_rea]

Rest assured, my attachment to the mortal world because of my longing for your update has kept me alive~! XD NOOOO..! Hope you overcome that tiny blockage soon, but oh well, your kiss scenes are already hot enough to satisfy the smutty craving for the time~ *giggles uncontrollably at the memory of the kissing scene* Will be on the constant look out for more kissing/hot scenes between Luke and Percy~!

Haha...I already pity Percy, but let's torture our adorable hero for more now~I think I have a sadistic streak when it comes to squirming/blushing Percy...Hmmm...>.<

Take your time with your writing, and hope to read more in the near future~!

[zetta_4799]

Totally made my night.. >:) Words cannot express what I have to say... But terribly good job dude!!! >:) You left me craving for more.. :D And I shall expect the next one soon.. <.< [Don't mind that sentence, chill and take your time in writing it.. :D]