On the Fringe // Chapter Five

[xaefryl]

Title: On the Fringe
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Eventual!Luke/Percy, past!Percy/Annabeth. Also some OC pairings, but those are very minor.
Warnings: AU, slash (m/m and f/f). Spoilers for The Last Olympian. Also, there's a handful of OCs, but most of them are camp counselors with minor roles.
Author's Note: This fic completely changes Luke's fate in The

Comments

[jan_rea]

Oh GOD! I LOVE YOU!! Really, I really do. This new chapter is so awesomely brilliant that it actually exceeds expectations in any way imaginable. The way you wrote Percy and his conflict with Annabeth was realistic and true to his character and situation.

And dear god, are you really trying to kill me? I was practically holding my breath and smiling idiotically the whole time when I read the scene between Luke and Percy near the creak and under the fireworks, away from everyone's eyes. It was so romantic in a different manner~!

The tension, love, and attraction between the both of them was expressed wonderfully, and when Luke confessed to Percy and said that he knew Percy loved him too I mentally squealed like a rabid fangirl in my mind~! And Zeus! You do write the most delectable kissing scenes I have ever read! *I'm all covered in drool now...*

And a cliffhanger! I really am eager to see how Percy will handle both the situation between him with both Luke and Annabeth~!

Please update soon! I'm soooo hungry for more~! =)

P.S: Again, I LOVE you for this wonderful chapter~!!!

[xaefryl]

:D Glad I exceed expectations. I'd hate to disappoint.

Oh, darn, I've been caught in my plan to kill my readers! Really, that was the only part of the chapter that was easy to write; kiss scenes always work out so smoothly for me but the moment anything gets dirtier than that *whoosh*! No sexy scene for you! DX Expect more kissing in later chapters, though. We'll see how far this fic goes.

You just know that Percy is going to have one heck of a time handling Luke and Annabeth. :3 Can't make things easy for him, now can I? I will try to have chapter seven done in a relatively decent amount of time, rather than the near month this chapter took me.

Thank you very much for your review! :D I appreciate it!

[jan_rea]

Rest assured, my attachment to the mortal world because of my longing for your update has kept me alive~! XD NOOOO..! Hope you overcome that tiny blockage soon, but oh well, your kiss scenes are already hot enough to satisfy the smutty craving for the time~ *giggles uncontrollably at the memory of the kissing scene* Will be on the constant look out for more kissing/hot scenes between Luke and Percy~!

Haha...I already pity Percy, but let's torture our adorable hero for more now~I think I have a sadistic streak when it comes to squirming/blushing Percy...Hmmm...>.<

Take your time with your writing, and hope to read more in the near future~!