so after reading my own story, i thought it was WAY to abstract and nearly impossible to follow. thats what happens when you just write and don't think. so i added names to make it easier to read and to help it actually make sense. here it is again, but it almost makes sense this time ( Read more... )

He sits against the door with a loaded .45 in his hands. Tears flow in a steady stream down his cheeks. The moans in the small room are growing louder with each passing moment. He is sure it is in his head, but they seem almost to be inviting him to join them. But he knows better, he knows they are not aware of him. Well not in the way he wishes at ( Read more... )

well i finished it. i am unsure of it. i do not hate it, but i dont love it either. i know there is room for improvement, but i wanted this story to be tree pages and it ended up to five. if i really opened it up hell i could pull fifty no problem. the thing is, i wanted a short story that was like a legend past down by mouth. the kind of story ( Read more... )

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