Comments | screaminglungs: Harry Potter/Draco Malfoy -Then There Were Four - WIP

screaminglungs

Harry Potter/Draco Malfoy -Then There Were Four - WIP - NC-17

Feb 12, 2006 11:35

Okay, so I've decided to take my lovely parent!Harry and Draco with baby Alex into multi-chapter land instead of the series of one shots I've been writing. *fingers crossed you'll all like*

Title: Then There Were Four (Part One)
Author: screaminglungs
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Harry/Draco with a side order of Ron/Hermione and others.
Summary: Draco comes home from ( Read more... )

wip, mpreg, snuffles, harry/draco, then there were four

Comments 13

breadbombtrail February 12 2006, 17:38:37 UTC

Heehee.

'ello, It's me. Your beautiful beta. I now have a ficjournal~ so you can list me under that name now.

Ehheeee. Beautiful work. I can't wait to beta the rest of the chapters. :D

screaminglungs February 13 2006, 00:24:41 UTC

helllloooo! I can't wait to write the rest of the chapters! Thank you honey!!! :-D Nice new name btw!

breadbombtrail February 13 2006, 02:04:24 UTC

thankyouthankyouu!

alloveryou February 12 2006, 19:14:45 UTC

Oh yay, i'm glad you've decided to do a WIP, though I do love your one shots as well.

great story so far, i can't wait for the next part! :D

screaminglungs February 13 2006, 00:25:32 UTC

Thank you!! I'm a bit worried about a WIP, I've not done one before and I'm always worried I'll run out of steam and/or ideas. EEP. However I'm sure it'll all be okay!

jadzia7667 February 12 2006, 22:58:53 UTC

His body was completely unprepared for the stress of carrying a child but when Severus had told them that he thought he had perfected a series of potions which would enable male pregnancy. Neither of them seemed to be able to get the idea out of their heads.

I think that should be a comma instead of a period between the bolded words. The second sentence is a fragment.

Very good...Draco's anger is IC, in my opinion...he'd be furious to think Harry had decided something without consulting him and more furious to think Harry was discussing their private life, even with Hermione. I look forward to seeing how this develops. I've always liked the idea of potions doing the job for mpreg. After all, if a wizard can turn a hedgehog into a pincushion, creating a womb and such really shouldn't be all that tough.

screaminglungs February 13 2006, 00:28:27 UTC

Thank you!!! Everyone who say they "don't get mpreg" and it's not possible no matter what are simply muggles! Haha. If a wizard can create Polyjuice or exactly turn a hedgehog into a pincushion, then of course they can create a womb!

*edits* Thank you for the heads up, I've not studied english for almost five years and so basically I suck!

Thank you soo much for reading, and thank you for writing Ambiguous Morality because it prevented me from getting utterly catatonically bored yesterday!

jadzia7667 February 13 2006, 02:51:08 UTC

You're welcome - grin. You don't suck...it's quite well written...I just always like it if someone tells me I made a typo or whatever, so I thought you might, too.

I'm glad you liked the story...grin.

screaminglungs February 13 2006, 18:31:10 UTC

Thank youu!

hitori_asobi February 13 2006, 18:58:05 UTC

ahh this is just so adorable. i can't wait to read what happens next :D

screaminglungs February 18 2006, 10:38:03 UTC

Thanks honey :-D

OMG luckyrory7 February 14 2006, 01:47:18 UTC

Um. I'm very excited about your WIP. Especially because this is probably my very favorite family!h/d in all the fandom land. Sooo cannot wait! :D

Re: OMG screaminglungs February 18 2006, 10:38:30 UTC

I am soo glad you said that!! I feel honoured that you love my Harry and Draco so much!