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Jul 19, 2005 01:35

Sweat coats my body, I lay back panting and exhausted. Another day where I pushed myself to the edge, trying to achieve some fleeting perfection. Another day, staring at the scars that cover my flesh. Reminders of weakness, reminders of past failings, of past sins. They repulse me, disgust me...and yet, they enchant me. I could lay here for hours, ( Read more... )

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dravenraiis July 23 2005, 16:54:59 UTC
I have to be honest that I don't truly understand this. It kind of jumps around a lot. It seems like near the end you've reached some resolution and you're content with imperfection... or something? Am I even close? Can you please explain this writing to me a bit?

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scratchcanmeep July 24 2005, 07:23:47 UTC
It was meant to be confusing and jump around, that's how I planned it. I'll explain it to you on im tomorrow, 'kay?

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