Title : Connection
Author: Polluxa
Pairing : TutixNagayan
Rating: Totally worksafe
Word Count: 6654
Disclaimer : This has no actual base in reality. I sincerely hope I’m wrong, though ^^
Summary: It's one of those days when everything goes wrong; schedules ruined, appointments missed, phone calls unconnected...
Warning: Interchangable POVs. Also,
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I'll be happy to beta it for you, though really there were only a few small mistakes which I'll need to go back and find to point out. The dialogue was great and I loved the time-stamp method of storytelling, and all the emotions and frustrations by Tuti and Nagayan were well pulled off without going too overboard or seeming out of character :)
I'm going to type up another reply with the actual beta/editing, so give me a few minutes more, but I just wanted to say that I really liked this and I can't wait for you to share it with everyone else on the community ^___^
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I'd be thrilled if you don't mind to beta this fic! Feel free, take your time and if you need the actual .doc file, just holler and I'll send it to you ^^.
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You are too kind! Seriously. And I don't deserve those kind words! ^^;;; Especially not from you who have a lot more experience in writing them and is a much better writer than I am. Thank you for the warm welcome into the fandom. Yeah, I believe I'll stick around for a long time here (at least, terrifyingly enough, much longer than in any other fandom... o.0; Oh god, help me...)
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Now~I can't wait for read Panda-san's fic *melirik ke panda-san* :DDD~ and I can't wait for Saturday gath *____*
And o,yeah TxN Music Video yg waktu itu sy bilang ON THE PROGRESS XDDD. Wish me luck so I can finish it on time :DDD
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Good luck on the music video!! Can't wait to watch it >>.<<
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hoi~I think I need more Tuti's dance XDDDDD~ Naga had corrupted my mind again with his idol DVD XDDD.
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YAAAAAAAAAAAY~
That's... That's...
*wibbles in incoherence*
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Thank you for reading! And for writing the comment! XDDD
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Just how completely in-love they are, and how obvious that fact is when they finally manage to connect on the phone at the end there
Yeeess, you said it better than I did! That's what I was aiming for, so I'm glad that it came out that way ^^ And youuu, you have to write something new, too! <-- though she's still holding back to read Photo Shoot because she hasn't had the perfect time to do so and won't think to read it passingly... XDD
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XDD Thanks for the encouragement. ♥ I hope I'm able to write something new too. *__* I have lots of ideas, but... I just have to motivate myself to write them! I hope you like Photo Shoot though. ^_^
Anyway, I'm really glad I had the chance to read this, and... I really hope to see more sooooon. XD
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Right back at you XDD *sends you motivating thoughts*
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dan kenapa jadi lo duluan yang posting??? *sebel*
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