[Fic] Connection

Jun 24, 2007 22:52


Title : Connection
Author: Polluxa
Pairing : TutixNagayan
Rating: Totally worksafe
Word Count: 6654
Disclaimer : This has no actual base in reality. I sincerely hope I’m wrong, though ^^
Summary: It's one of those days when everything goes wrong; schedules ruined, appointments missed, phone calls unconnected...
Warning: Interchangable POVs. Also, ( Read more... )

fanfiction, rps, yaoi, tutixnagayan

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kooriyoukai June 24 2007, 22:23:24 UTC
Ohhhh this story was wonderful! And so adorable and well-written too, I really, really enjoyed reading it ^____^

I'll be happy to beta it for you, though really there were only a few small mistakes which I'll need to go back and find to point out. The dialogue was great and I loved the time-stamp method of storytelling, and all the emotions and frustrations by Tuti and Nagayan were well pulled off without going too overboard or seeming out of character :)

I'm going to type up another reply with the actual beta/editing, so give me a few minutes more, but I just wanted to say that I really liked this and I can't wait for you to share it with everyone else on the community ^___^

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scratchbook June 25 2007, 01:13:11 UTC
Oh... oh my, thank you... I'm not sure I deserve such kind comment ^^;; The fact that you're one of my favorite TxN writers and you enjoy what I write is enough compliment already. Thank you :)

I'd be thrilled if you don't mind to beta this fic! Feel free, take your time and if you need the actual .doc file, just holler and I'll send it to you ^^.

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kooriyoukai June 27 2007, 13:50:04 UTC
I realize now that a .doc file probably would have been easier and less uh, cluttering on your entry, lol ( ... )

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scratchbook June 28 2007, 12:13:16 UTC
Hahaha, it's okay, I've screened it ^^ I haven't had the chance to go over it all. I'm taking this baby home with me and will thank you more thoroughly tomorrow XDD

You are too kind! Seriously. And I don't deserve those kind words! ^^;;; Especially not from you who have a lot more experience in writing them and is a much better writer than I am. Thank you for the warm welcome into the fandom. Yeah, I believe I'll stick around for a long time here (at least, terrifyingly enough, much longer than in any other fandom... o.0; Oh god, help me...)

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rai_neko June 25 2007, 02:19:47 UTC
Rei-san *___*. You should write more XDDD~ I love the conversation part ^^ and those mailbox messages :D. And...and that MoriDaiki part :DDDD. You should make a sequel about that bet XDDDD. << gomen, terlalu banyak permintaan :DDDD>>

Now~I can't wait for read Panda-san's fic *melirik ke panda-san* :DDD~ and I can't wait for Saturday gath *____*
And o,yeah TxN Music Video yg waktu itu sy bilang ON THE PROGRESS XDDD. Wish me luck so I can finish it on time :DDD
^^ <>

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scratchbook June 25 2007, 02:44:15 UTC
Ahahaha~~ Thank you for reading, ne! And for the nice comment ^__^. A sequel about that bet? XDDD I'm not so sure about that, though. I'm not really into EijixDaiki XDDD

Good luck on the music video!! Can't wait to watch it >>.<<

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rai_neko June 25 2007, 02:51:56 UTC
I'm not really into EijixDaiki XDDD. I knew it >o< .

hoi~I think I need more Tuti's dance XDDDDD~ Naga had corrupted my mind again with his idol DVD XDDD.

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scratchbook June 25 2007, 03:38:36 UTC
Dear God, SO TRUE! You have to stop me, because I spent last weekend practicing the Hona Sainara and the Bengara Koushi dance *____* I'm BEYOND help...

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hibimaosuki June 25 2007, 02:46:35 UTC
...

YAAAAAAAAAAAY~

That's... That's...

*wibbles in incoherence*

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scratchbook June 25 2007, 02:49:01 UTC
People has got to stop reading this while it's un-beta-ed ^^;;;;;

Thank you for reading! And for writing the comment! XDDD

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hibimaosuki June 25 2007, 02:54:02 UTC
Blame rai_neko for linking in Lube Chat. XDDDDDDDD

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rai_neko June 25 2007, 03:41:23 UTC
XDDDDDDDDDDDDD~ Nyaaw~ gomen~I can't help because I like it so much *__* (*I'll trade the treasure box video with you later for this :P) but don't worry, I believe there only few people who read this fic before you post in community :P *I hope so ^^;; >////

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analineblue June 25 2007, 02:55:31 UTC
I really, REALLY enjoyed this. ^________^ Just how completely in-love they are, and how obvious that fact is when they finally manage to connect on the phone at the end there - it's perfect. *wibbles* ♥ The whole thing is just really, really sweet, and I really loved it. I hope you write more soon! XD

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scratchbook June 25 2007, 03:47:26 UTC
Thank youu~ ^^. The fact that you read something I write is... >.< *doki doki shiteiru* And thank you for commenting, too ^^.

Just how completely in-love they are, and how obvious that fact is when they finally manage to connect on the phone at the end there

Yeeess, you said it better than I did! That's what I was aiming for, so I'm glad that it came out that way ^^ And youuu, you have to write something new, too! <-- though she's still holding back to read Photo Shoot because she hasn't had the perfect time to do so and won't think to read it passingly... XDD

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analineblue June 26 2007, 14:54:10 UTC
I'm really glad that rai_neko linked this in the chat, because otherwise I might not have seen it! ^_^

XDD Thanks for the encouragement. ♥ I hope I'm able to write something new too. *__* I have lots of ideas, but... I just have to motivate myself to write them! I hope you like Photo Shoot though. ^_^

Anyway, I'm really glad I had the chance to read this, and... I really hope to see more sooooon. XD

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scratchbook June 27 2007, 00:35:41 UTC
I really hope to see more sooooon.

Right back at you XDD *sends you motivating thoughts*

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tonomurajiro June 25 2007, 04:21:36 UTC
aaaaaaa!!! really love it!!! *kisses you*

dan kenapa jadi lo duluan yang posting??? *sebel*

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scratchbook June 25 2007, 06:20:07 UTC
thaaanks XDDD I posted my fic before you do yours because I started it waaay before you :P

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