[Fic] Connection

[scratchbook]

Title : Connection
Author: Polluxa
Pairing : TutixNagayan
Rating: Totally worksafe
Word Count: 6654
Disclaimer : This has no actual base in reality. I sincerely hope I’m wrong, though ^^
Summary: It's one of those days when everything goes wrong; schedules ruined, appointments missed, phone calls unconnected...
Warning: Interchangable POVs. Also,

Comments

[innusiq]

Happy Day! Happy Day! It's nice having celebration days longer than 24hrs, isn't it?

First off, I truly, truly, truly adore this fic. These guys - what can I say, they are freaking adorable. Poor Takashi though. As I was reading about his dwindling spirits, all I could think about was the picture he posted in his blog today/yesterday/whatever-day aka his most recent blog posting. Such a sad face :( You captured what I could see in that pic, here - with words. Lovely.

Back to the fic, how can these two be so oblivious to the truth? Or is it that they are so in denial for fear of losing what they both seem to depend on? Hmmmmm, I'm thinking the latter... or maybe Tuti is the first and Takashi is the second? Hmmmmm...

So, in closing, much love for this. I hope you write more.

[scratchbook]

Yaay for time differences! XDD And thank you for reading & commenting! (You should write more, too! Seriously ^^) Aaah, that Pout (TM)... How he could look so sad and cute at the same time, it's beyond me ;__; And I'm glad you think I could capture his dwindling spirits, because I wasn't sure I pulled it off well...

Hmmm... in the case of this fic, I'm leaning more to latter, for both of them. I think on some level they realize their feelings for each other, and perhaps even the other's feeling, too. But they don't really talk about it. Their close friendship/relationship just sort of... happens... and grows naturally by itself. Next thing they know, they simply can't live without each other. ...Forgive me for this early morning sappiness. It's my lack of sleep talking XDD;;

[innusiq]

How he could look so sad and cute at the same time, it's beyond me

How the man can look beautiful with a straight serious face, and becomes gorgeous by simply smiling... now that is something I am seriously amazed by. His smiles... Tuti is a lucky man to see them - the honest and truly happy ones. Lucky.

Their close friendship/relationship just sort of... happens... and grows naturally by itself. Next thing they know, they simply can't live without each other.

Which is exactly where they are in your fic, having this need to be with each other and becoming frustrated when each effort is thwarted time and time again. Somedays, when I see that pout in Takashi's blog I think it's a day like you described in your fic - or something to that effect. I don't know...

Forgive me for this early morning sappiness. It's my lack of sleep talking XDD;;

Hey, even on the best night of sleep I can have early morning sappiness. Sappiness is good. We all love the sappiness. *nods*

Pssst...(after reading an above comment)... my third

[scratchbook]

Ahem... I watched that Daiki's apartment clip on youtube the other day, and saw how COMFORTABLE MoriEi was on Daiki's SMALL bed, then my brain went *^_____________________^*, which is rather creepy but inevitable XDDD. Ahem.

[ch_ar_me]

thanks for sharing this!! so much LOVE ♥♥♥♥

I was grinning the whole time, and I could just feel their frustration mounting up ^^

I like the fact that this could pass as a wonderful, gen-friendship type of fic, but still with lots of squeeage from the undertones ^____^

[scratchbook]

Thank you for reading & commenting ^____^ I'm glad you thought that way because the subtlety was what I was aiming for :D As for the squeeage part, I think it comes naturally with these guys ^^. They're basically squeeable in everything they do (especially to each other XDDD).

[ch_ar_me]

if they weren't capable of making us squee all the time, there would be less people shipping them ^^;;

I love fics that scream with subtlety and UST ♥

more more! ^___^

[scratchbook]

I love fics that scream with subtlety and UST ♥

*gasps* You are my new FRIEND! XDD

[drivingmyself]

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! *squels*

I almost hit my father 'cos I was in the middle olf this fic and he needed computer and I wanted to see what happens~~~.

Awwwwwww. <3_______<3. I want to tell you something constructive! But hwat I would tell you, mii don't know!

[scratchbook]

^^;;; Your poor, poor father... Thank you for reading & writing the comment! It's more than enough for me, so don't worry XDDD