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scout_lover

A Lesson in Violence

Aug 28, 2009 00:14

A Lesson in Violence
Leverage, Eliot+team
PG-13 for language, implied violence
Written for tigriswolf at comment_fic

( Eliot's scary when he's pissed … )

alec hardison, fic, comment_fic, leverage, eliot spencer

Comments 37

rubygirl29 August 28 2009, 13:40:00 UTC

Okay, I couldn't help thinking of Ronon "interrogating" Kavanaugh in "Critical Mass". Or Vin, "interrogating" the baddie hanging upside down from a tree in "Witness." LOL!

Yeah, those scruffy, dangerous men are dangerous to me!

scout_lover August 28 2009, 13:52:39 UTC

I'm tellin' you, there is nothing like a scruffy man with a raspy voice threatening mayhem to make my wheels spin. It's like chocolate.

tigriswolf August 28 2009, 19:41:31 UTC

That's awesome. Thank you so much!

scout_lover August 28 2009, 22:57:57 UTC

You're more than welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the prompt!

cool_tre_cool August 29 2009, 01:36:47 UTC

*shivers* This is delicious, simply delicious. Well written, beautifully characterized.... A masterpiece of Angry!Hurt!Eliot.

scout_lover August 29 2009, 03:25:31 UTC

Aw, thank you so much! I'm delighted you liked it so. I just *adore* the idea of angry!hurt!Eliot (or, okay, just, y'know, Eliot, period), and I would imagine it would be about the most terrifying sight there is.

Thanks for reading!

leenys August 29 2009, 01:44:46 UTC

Parker is bird-like, isn't she? Good comparison!

scout_lover August 29 2009, 03:27:55 UTC

Thank you. Parker is *very* bird-like, the way she just soars fearlessly through the air, and with her quick movements. I just love her.

phantomminuet August 29 2009, 03:24:09 UTC

I loved the chess reference and the idea that Sophie is the team's queen. Nice job.

scout_lover August 29 2009, 03:36:49 UTC

Thank you. I love the idea that Eliot plays chess (there is a mind under the pretty!), and I think he would see her as their queen. The queen in chess is very powerful, and Sophie is that -- beautiful, brilliant, strong. And I think as much as Eliot "plays" with the other two "kids," squabbling and such, he and Sophie have a much more grown-up relationship. Even if they don't always agree, there's an undercurrent of mutual respect that I love.

Thanks for reading!