ohh, that was incredibly beautiful and tender - so very much them, in stubborness and patience and love and slow learning. thank you very much, and Happy New Year and belated Merry Christmas to you as well )
Poor Tanda, he has the Gods' patience...! I like how you emphasized how their traditional gender roles are reversed. And I liked how you had Balsa dreaming she was back in Hunter's Cave. That was such an idyllic time for them. It must be hard for all of them to look back on that. Well done.
I take so many knocks at Tanda...but he is my favorite character and it comes with the territory. I loved the time during the Hunter's Cave and it was kind of heartbreaking to realize that although there they were a "family" effectively that is really gone from them at the end. That and Chagum acts as a link between them that mitigates some of the awkwardness.
Anyways, I'm glad you enjoyed! Thank you for the lovely comment!
I have to admit - all those fics were wonderful. I enjoyed reading all of them, but I absolutely love both the Seirei no Moribito ones... perhaps even more so since they're so rare to come by! As I read the comments, it's nice to know I'm not the only who has Tanda as their favorite Seirei character. xD And you do make fun of him so much. Blossom man indeed. *cough*.
I do agree that he would definitely be known for his patience. That man is blessed with it. And you inserting Chagum's notorious line ("Just sleep with her.") was awesome. I remember that episode fondly, and crack up every time I hear it. Ohh Chagum, it's so nice that you fully support Balsa x Tanda shipping. XD
Oh! And bonus points for the title to the other Seirei fic you wrote for that other person. I happen to like the scripture where that particular verse comes from. At least, I think that's where you got it from. o.o
We need more Seirei writers...I think I comprise about 75% of all fanfiction written for the series so far. And Tanda is so goofy and such that I can't help but make fun of him...he's that awesome, really. Balsa really kicks arse as well. :) In truth, I pretty much love everyone in the series (however, I don't have epic ideas of what to do with them as of yet...but the shininess!).
I totally need an icon, btw, that says "Chagum says: TandaxBalsa = my shiny Seirei OTP!" I am a fan of the wisdom literature in the Bible...and I thought of that and it was necessary that the quote become a title. Yes, I did get it from there...although a lot of people think it comes from from the Byrds song.
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But I am glad you enjoyed!
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Anyways, I'm glad you enjoyed! Thank you for the lovely comment!
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Um, if you don't mind? Typo: "--propelled by invisible breathes".
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And thanks for that, I've fixed it - I think it is a rule that I have to make one egregious mistake in a pivotal line per fic. *shakes head at self*
Anyways, thank you for reading! Glad you liked!
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I do agree that he would definitely be known for his patience. That man is blessed with it. And you inserting Chagum's notorious line ("Just sleep with her.") was awesome. I remember that episode fondly, and crack up every time I hear it. Ohh Chagum, it's so nice that you fully support Balsa x Tanda shipping. XD
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I totally need an icon, btw, that says "Chagum says: TandaxBalsa = my shiny Seirei OTP!" I am a fan of the wisdom literature in the Bible...and I thought of that and it was necessary that the quote become a title. Yes, I did get it from there...although a lot of people think it comes from from the Byrds song.
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Glad you enjoyed! <3
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