Hello, I'm Gone

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I was ridiculously productive today! Woot. And apparently in the mood for angst...

Requested by: xaki-kun
Fandom: Host Club
Characters: Tamaki, Haruhi, Kyouya, mentions of others.
Request:: Melancholic, unrequited TamaHaru.
Summary: Angst alert! When Ouran's Peter Pan grows up and leaves Neverland, he dons a suit and heads to the office, never

Comments

[elvaron]

So much love! I'm sorta glad that Neverland didn't turn into some miraculous happy ending, although I was waiting for it. But it would have been a let down, I think, and your ending was far more dramatic. Very nice.

And while I know nothing (nothing!) about the minor characters of HP, I must say that the second one was a great read too. You really have the wonderful knack of turning flat characters nice.. and, uh, round 8D.

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I don't think there was any way Neverland could have ended happily, short of a dea ex Haruhi (and even then, that would be difficult). Thinking about it now, I actually think you half inspired this fic a long, long time ago (this would be what happens to Tamaki who is not disinherited). But this is actually a lot happier version than the original outline. :)

Ah, the HP minor characters (I really don't care for the Trinity all that much, but the sadly under-developed minor characters need some lovin').

Now I have an image of several rotund minor characters. XD

[endou]

Neverland was an absolutely stunning piece of work. I truly can't even think of the words to describe my awe. *o* Simply stunning.

I am a sucker for fics divided into parts. I believe Darker Than was my favorite, followed by Treachery in Two Parts.

It is decided! The Blacks are the Suohs of Harry Potter! LALALA!

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It is good when fic ferments...for a year, I think. Although I made a beloved children's classic dark and angsty. :0

You know (especially when taken with that first part), I think that on many levels Walburga and Sirius and just so different they are incapable of understanding one's primary motives (not that this exonerates Walburga for being horrible...), kind of like Walburga doesn't get Alphard. There's one thing that she is taught all Blacks should be and she doesn't get the deviations.

And I was thinking about that! The Blacks and the Suous are so the same. We have evil grandmother / mother, disinherited kid, and father who doesn't do much to stop it...and all that blood stuff thrown in. This makes me want to do something about the "Noble and Most Ancient House of Suou - Toujours Pur." There's a crossover...because all roads lead to Harry Potter and Ouran in my imagination.

<3

[jeaniza]

Neverland is lovely...awww! XDDD

[sciathan_file]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed!

[o_silver_lady_o]

He feels his throat tighten and he can’t quite explain why.

You killed me with Neverland. I know chap54 was angsty but now I've read this I will never see it again in the same light. I think the worst was concerning Haruhi's dream. Now I need chocolate D:. At first I couldn't help but picture Tamaki as his father... but while I was reading he was himself again... if you can call "himself" a Tamaki without sparkle or long, unnecesary speeches, that's it.

Ok, I admit it. This is the Tamaki of chapter 54. Are you happy now? *snif* Well, congratulations (¿?), and don't worry about this poor soul plunged into a weel of despair *hums "Always look on the bright side of life" for recovering*

Btw, just in case, I loved it and it's in my memories :P

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Oh, don't get me wrong, I loved looking at Tamaki in his suit, but he needs loose bohemian clothing and ridiculous turtle necks that make me want to questions his sexuality, and bright, bright colors. Suits are damn hot, but kinda sad on him. *wink*

Go forth and get chocolate! Yuzuru and Tamaki could become very similar (hasn't thought of this before)...because Yuzuru is in many ways the way Tamaki's described here, albeit more of a jokester. And I can't tell you how alien it was to only write one very minor Tamaki speech and not vie from the "greatest amount of words per sentence prize" (currently, 173 words, held by Yuzuru).

Oh, he'll recover. I don't think they'll let him choose his grandmother.

I'm glad you liked it! Now, go forth and eat massive quantites of chocolate in a state of fervid ecstacy! /Tamaki moment

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I don't mind at all! Thanks for letting me know, too, because the I know why you're here!

And I'm glad you enjoyed(? does one enjoy something like that?) it.

Thank you for your lovely comments! <3

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*All blushy*

Thanks! All of my writing is nicely catalogued in the first entry of my lj, by series, pairing, and so on and so forth. And I'd love to see your writing! I took a look at your profile and you have good taste. :)