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[danakszoul]

Because that other thing was rather short, and I have too many Eroica fics eating my brain all at once. This is rather short, too

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[ani_blue]

lovely but strange...'m confused.
Kind of reminds of the film "Sliding Doors", with the whole 'two different possibilities' thing.

[danakszoul]

Thanks for the lovely-- as to the confusing, I promise it gets less so.

Hm... I have to see that movie...

=^_^=
Anneko

[esda]

LOL! I think, I know what's happening there, because I also have a parallel world plotbunny (though it will be a totally different story).
My guess: The explosion of the laboratory somehow mixed up two parallel worlds: the canon world, as we know it, with Klaus and Dorian NOT being lovers and the "parallel world" with Klaus and Dorian being lovers. And know the real world Klaus and the parallel world Klaus have switched places (or is it Dorian that switched the place? Hm... Klaus somehow makes more sense).

Can't wait to read the next part of this story! And I really like this story idea! *g*

[esda]

btw: You're also the author of "Mondschein und Sternenlicht", aren't you? Are you going to continue that fic? Because I really hope so ^^°

And since I'm always correcting the German in the fics I read... *lol*

"I'm fine, I told you. Du brauchst doch keine angst zu haben, verliebte..."
-> it should be "Du brauchst doch keine Angst zu haben, Geliebter/Liebling/Schatz..."
(I would leave the "doch" away. It's not wrong but it makes the sentence sound strange. And "Angst" with a capital, because nouns are written capitalised in German. And instead of "verliebte" (which is an adjective and means rather "to be in love") it should be Geliebter, Liebling or Schatz (meaning lover/darling).)

cheers
Esther

[danakszoul]

I *do* need to finish that fic... I know how it ends, but there's an in-between bit I'm missing.

Thanks for the correction-- I'm glad it's easy to make changes on lj so I can edit. I'll do that right away.

=^_^=
Anneko

[esda]

Ah... I know that problem with the "things in between" missing. That's how ALL of my plotbunnies are: I have an idea, a beginning and I ALWAYS know how it ends, but the rest.... *aüshtaoiöüwuzähsror089bgh*!!!

I'm glad it's easy to make changes on lj so I can edit.

*g* I love LJ because of that, too. *lol*

[ifu_one]

That's one interesting amnesia case- I hope Dorian gets out of the bed before Klaus wakes up again and forgets they are lovers!
I love your Eroica Fanficts!
Looking for the next part...