kingdom hearts -- trapped in a silent fiction
title: trapped in a silent fiction
wordcount: 7457
rating: PG-13
synopsis: If only she had power over her own memories.
( It is afternoon in Twilight Town. )
wordcount: 7457
rating: PG-13
synopsis: If only she had power over her own memories.
( It is afternoon in Twilight Town. )
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Believe me I'm equally totally shamelessly biased. Highfive to that! :D Ahaha, the Organisation's pretty much the only bunch of characters I feel comfortable writing x) Xigbar's an awesome character; the right mixture of lazy good-humouredness (rofl is that even a word gah), and chilling as and when he puts his mind to it.
I'm glad you think so! ♥ Though part two is coming soon, I just hope it elicits a similar response C:
Dark and sad. In a way, it sort of describes Namine's existence, doesn't it?
adfsgdfkjllf thank you so, so much for reading and reviewing!
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Highfive indeed. :D Ah, I know what you mean. Writing Sora always makes me a little uncomfortable. The only reason Riku is not as difficult is probably because his side of the story is quite dark as well (so it's kind of like writing for the Organization, right?) Haha. I think that describes Xigbar perfectly, even if it's not a real word. XD
Yay for part two! Yay because it means there will be Luxord~~~
Yes, I suppose it does. Poor thing.
You're welcome! And it was totally my pleasure to read this. :)
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Yeah! It's like...I dunno, there's this sort of innocence to him, this facet of sorts which the Org. does not have. Quite agreed on the Riku part!
Yes indeedio, Luxord! Gosh, he's an awesome character. Shame about the lack of screentime :/
...maybe that's why I keep writing about her so much :/ I can't quite fully understand why a certain proportion of the fandom doesn't like her. She's every bit as flawed as the rest of them, and she's as much a part of the Organisation as the others are, so...well, yeah.
(: Glad to hear you enjoyed it! ♥
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Ahaha, why, thank you so much! Too true. But I myself wouldn't recommend my stuff to anyone seriously considering a career in writing -- I am horribly lacking in proofreading skills, and it shows. Good grief, it shows. That, and I tend to ignore grammar in favour of being descriptive. Whoops. And, hey, there are lots of good writers who write fanfiction, and aspire to be authors. I think it's quite as good a place as any to start.
Ah, yes, those three - I'm most proud of Xigbar and Zexion's, partly because Xigbar's fan-frigging-tastic, and when I write Zexion, he always comes off as a bit wistful, somewhat pestered by an inner melancholy, but all that is restrained because of what he is. Most of my characterisation for Xaldin stems from those quotes during Days - I don't know, but there's an implication that he was no stranger to those facets of life, but something happened to close his heart to it (er, aside from his being a Nobody ( ... )
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Yes, I know what you're at, and I do conclude that yours is a very valid point. But I mean to say that, the average writer, if fully prepared to improve themselves, should look wherever they can! Anthologies, online literature, whatever. There's a whole wealth of unpublished genius out there, after all x) But yes, fanfiction is a pretty...obscure branch, ahaha.
LOL, I just hope my blatant disregard for some grammar rules (in favour for exceedingly, annoyingly long sentences!) isn't very painfully obvious.
Haha, Xigbar's just so popular like that. Though truth be told, it's sort of hard to pick favourites with the Organisation. They're all brilliant in their own ways. And sure, many people wish Days didn't exist, and I suppose it was slightly pointless and didn't elaborate on more details, but the characterisation we gleaned was welcome nonetheless ( ... )
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