Comments | scarletts_awry: five things, batch one

scarletts_awry

five things, batch one

Apr 24, 2007 00:22

So I accomplished maybe one-third of what I wanted to today, but some is better than none.

one for buffy-lily

( Five Things Adam Notices that No One Else Does )

genre: gen, genre: ficlet, genre: boyslash, fic, genre: stand alone, genre: five things, char: don flack, char: adam ross, char: mac taylor, char: danny messer, genre: het, char: john sheppard

Comments 13

gin200168 April 24 2007, 04:45:10 UTC

hehehe. Pervy Danny. He wants to have some fun with Stella and Flack and the ties on Mac's couch. :-D

And Mac, on his knees, begging for him... Danny'd be practically coming from that alone. ;-)

scarletts_awry April 25 2007, 04:30:27 UTC

He wants to have some fun with Stella and Flack and the ties on Mac's couch.

Can you blame him? ;D

And yes, Mac begging, that *has* to be at the top of the list.

gin200168 April 25 2007, 04:43:53 UTC

ummmmmm not really, no.

waaaaaaiiiittttt. Nobody's every WRITTEN that pairing. Hrm. You or stel need do to that! :-D

She gave me some to work on. Am trying.

mybestexcuse April 24 2007, 04:46:22 UTC

4. By now, everyone knows it Danny was who arranged the crimescene mock up dolls like they were having an orgy in the break room, but nobody saw Mac, um, adjust some of their positions.

YES.

I loved them all, I love love love. It's the stupid little things that make me so happy. I love the Lindsay one, and I love the Hawkes one, because it's totally true.

scarletts_awry April 25 2007, 04:22:08 UTC

Yay! Thank you; I'm glad you enjoyed it. It really is the little details that make a world work. I've had that notion of mock up dolls committing acts of public indecency for a while now (and i'm pretty sure stellaluna deserves credit) but I haven't managed to do anything with it.

(also! school of rock quote icone! eeeee!)

mybestexcuse April 24 2007, 04:47:35 UTC

And the Mac one makes me sad, in a really good way.

scarletts_awry April 25 2007, 04:15:51 UTC

I think you just described Mac really well. ;)

mondeo April 24 2007, 16:26:55 UTC

I love the one about the mock up dolls and Mac. I can so see it happening.

I'm in love with the Mac answers though. You manage to pack a real punch in so few words. And I'm totally intrigued by the third one.

scarletts_awry April 25 2007, 04:13:47 UTC

I love the one about the mock up dolls and Mac.

Thank you. :) I've had some variation of that imagine in my head for a while, but I've yet to be able to do something with it. (And though I can't remember what exactly spawned it, I'm reasonably sure I have to give stellaluna at least half the credit)

I'm in love with the Mac answers though. You manage to pack a real punch in so few words.

Thanks. I'm rather pleased with that one. All but #5 started out much longer, which actually is the opposite of how I usually write. In my head, #3 is an unspoken crossover, Mac Taylor/John Sheppard of SGA. It really would *not* happen under any other circumstances.

stellaluna_ April 24 2007, 18:57:40 UTC

Oh, these are all perfect. Adam's observations are so fitting for him, because he really is the type of person to notice those kinds of things. And I love Danny's fantasies. He's right, too, that you'd have to be dead not to find a threesome with Stella and Flack in Mac's office hot.

As for my two: oh, yes, those movies all are ones Flack would watch many times. And Mac...you just killed me *ded*, in the good way, with those. They get more and more heartbreaking as they go along, until the final one is just an absolute gut-punch. Thank you; they're perfect.

scarletts_awry April 25 2007, 04:34:52 UTC

I really need to write a good Adam fic one of these days, because he's just... got a lot of potential. And Danny... Danny's not made of stone, you know. He is aware of the ridiculously pretty people he has to work with.

You're welcome. Picking out Flack's favorite movies was fun, and I'm really glad you liked the Mac set. I built it backwards from Stella. The first four were all quite a bit longer at first, but I pared them down, which is also backwards from how I usually write.