Comments | saya19: Dark Charm Chapter 11

saya19

Dark Charm Chapter 11

Apr 16, 2010 23:28

Anyways, I'm back again. I know it's been a while but I've been really tired from like school. So I wrote all in one shot. This is really long. This chapter is probably a lot more toned down after the last chapter. They go back to their roots of talking with one another. Sorry if it's boring but I thought I should show the balance in the ( Read more... )

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saya19 April 17 2010, 14:00:00 UTC

Thanks for reading. LOL. Kyuhyun is awesome. I love him. And Ryeowook and Henry too.

leunah23 April 17 2010, 11:02:49 UTC

awwwwww...jealous KYU is so cute!
you know what?no matter how many times you say that each chapter of this great great fic was worse than the other...ITS REALLY NOT!!!each chapter is LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE!!!!
it has been a while that I had been THIS excited to see someone update :)
thanks so much for writing this! I dont want this series to end really and the way you write Kyuwook...it was very sweet but not too cheesy :)
and oh dont worry about having a hard time writing them as a real couple..coz everything you wrote was just PERFECT!!!!

saya19 April 17 2010, 14:02:33 UTC

Hehe. Thanks for reading as always. I just get paranoid. Ahhh....so tired from right this. Too much excitement. Thank you for checking up on me :D

kyulyn April 17 2010, 14:41:18 UTC

LOL I don;t get why ppl love to call their works fails while they are not. Absolutely not. The whole fic is amazing, and each chap is <333
I love the arrogant Kyu. and how Ryeo fanboys over his body :)). And the mirror in Ryeo Wook's room, so random, but I really like it :))
Happy writing~~~

saya19 April 17 2010, 14:46:09 UTC

Haha. I'm sorry. It's just me being paranoid and everything. Thank you for reading this.
Yeah. Haha. There may be a lot of random things because I write what I think about at the time. No play. >.< Haha.
Kyuwook <333

bluefireflies April 17 2010, 17:15:35 UTC

Wow...this chapter makes me gigling all the time..

jealous kyu over RAIN,ryoowook fetish over kyu's muscle back,their conversation about ryeowook's weight..it feels so domestic..i love their dynamics as a new couple..

you always give us a reader a great and well written story..cheer up!^__^

saya19 April 17 2010, 17:28:16 UTC

Haha. Thanks. Lol. I guess I was just tired. Bad day, iunno.

Yeah.I wanted to provide some silly/comic relief with their conversations. Glad you liked it. Hopefully they seemed like a realisitc couple.

Kyuwook <3333

dralinalucius April 18 2010, 03:53:16 UTC

oh so sweet~ this is so not bad at all. Jealous kyu is just ♥ I love love love love love love this ♥ ♥ such cute chapter XD

Hmm...I'm curious about wookie's first kiss *contemplates* will you reveal that soon?*hopeful grin*

saya19 April 18 2010, 03:56:12 UTC

Ahh. His first kiss. LOl. I wish I knew as well. I've only read that somewhere. I don't know the details but there is a show where Kyuhyun and Ryeowook talk about their first kiss (intentional). I laughed quite a bit at what Ryeowook said. It was sweet. You should watch it. You'll find it on YT under Kyuwook's first kiss. I think.

Glad you liked it.
haha, if i ever find out. I'll be sure to write abut it.