Fic: Dreaming of Flying (Matt/Aiden, NC-17)

Jan 07, 2011 19:46

Summary: Aiden dreams of the things he wants, but has trouble admitting, even to himself. But maybe dreams and reality aren’t always so far apart.

~6,100 words, NC-17. Matt/Aiden. Warnings for swearing, slash and sex. This never happened, the boys own themselves etc.

A/N: comeoutcomeout and bloodfusion betaed this for me, and they are both amazing and I adore them. Thank ( Read more... )

dreaming of flying, the x factor, fic, matt/aiden

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agnostostheos January 7 2011, 18:45:28 UTC
Lovely!
I'm too exhausted to back this up with why, but it really was.

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savingcolours January 7 2011, 18:59:13 UTC
Thank you! :D

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horopter January 7 2011, 19:11:26 UTC
This is so fantastic and heartbreaking (even with the happy ending)! Your writing and characterization are stunning. Absolutely stunning. You've got our Maiden boys down so right. Those text messages; I'm starting to believe they happened. You've really got Matt's smiley faces and kisses down pat. LOL. Aiden has the hardest (lol, pun intended?) crush ever and I would've felt more sorry for him if his dreams weren't so smoking. Hotness aside, I really loved your dream descriptions, they were so surreal and thus believable as dreams (e.g., random psychedelic flowers blooming in the room, Matt naked one second then not in the next). Both of their vulnerability and insecurities are endearing and definitely in-character because when you're so in love how could you not be?

(Loved, loved the bonus One Direction bits and Aiden's awesome, beautiful mum!)

This is incredible. Definitely a POP! LOL. Putting it in my memory for safekeeping. <333

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savingcolours January 7 2011, 19:20:52 UTC
Thank you so much for this lovely comment! I'm thrilled that you liked the fic, and so relieved that the dreams worked. And haha, I really enjoyed writing the text messages!

(I'm kinda in love with Aiden's beautiful mum, no lie! *g*)

Just, thank you sweetheart ♥ *hugs*

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wastedrebel January 7 2011, 19:30:37 UTC
This is really, really good. I love it when someone's writing makes me interested in the characters and their situations and feelings, and not just the sex! I love their snarky interaction, it seems realistic, and Aiden's conflicting emotions. Also, your description of .. well, everything, is just totally spot on and lovely, and it feels like it flows well and naturally. I really enjoy your style! and I like the little bits you tie in together, like Aiden buying the monkey hat, and stuff.

Joanna is the best <3

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savingcolours January 7 2011, 19:45:26 UTC
Thank you! I'm so happy you found the characters interesting; that's what I was aiming for! Thank you so much for commenting! ♥

Joanna is the best, totally! :D

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team_allen January 7 2011, 19:36:03 UTC
This was just amazing.
Loved it so much

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savingcolours January 7 2011, 19:46:16 UTC
Thank you sweetie!

♥!

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cariad123 January 7 2011, 19:38:43 UTC
I couldn't love this anymore! Amazing :)
The details you got in there were amazing and I loved the flow of the whole thing, I was simultaneously looking forward to what would happen next and dreading reaching the end!
I think you got Matt and Aiden down perfectly. Honestly one of the best characterisations of these guys I've read! Loved it!
xx

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savingcolours January 7 2011, 19:50:12 UTC
Thank you so much! :D

I'm happy you liked it and liked the style, and that the characterisation worked for you! ♥

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