[fic] Cracks in the Sidewalk, part iii

[swallowedhalo]

Title: Cracks in the Sidewalk
Pairing: SasuNaru
Genre: AU, Multichap, Angst
Rating: Eventual R or NC-17
Summary: Naruto is a young high school student with a passion for music. From Bob Dylan to Sex Pistols to Elliott Smith, he buries himself deeper and deeper his records with every passing day. Head in the clouds, he dreams of forming a

Comments

[spitefulmage]

OMG I was very weary of this fic because of the AU and well, band status of it since Ive read way too many really bad ones to not be scared of new ones. But I just adore this fic. Im in love with it!

The characters are so perfect X3 I love how you've done Sasuke and his family, everything just fits so perfectly for him and same for Naruto. Im very excited to read the next chapter =D <3 And just the little touches like where he got his car from, the flashbacks and everything behind the field. Its all so lovely and descriptive and the whole thing has a mood to it, its perfect. <3 much love for you, I am now a stalker X3 <3

[swallowedhalo]

Thank you so much! Originally I had wanted to try to do a Sid and Nancy rendition only with Sasuke and Naruto (hey even the initials match up ^O^), but then it didn't really fit. Not to mention I've never lived in the 80s before (well for the first three years of my life, but then, that was in post-Rice Bowl China).

I guess I'm weary of a lot of band and high school fics too (but hey, I'm currently writing AUs for both genres *shot*). But I think it offers a lot of interesting freedom and I feel more comfortable writing about familiar things and places instead of...ninjaworld. XD

[kyou_kyou]

It flows amazingly I just want to hug you ^.^

[swallowedhalo]

Yay! *hugged and hugs back*

[pepsi_chan]

great, as always. ^^ Can't wait for the next chapter. ^^

[swallowedhalo]

Yay! Thank you!

[grimy13]

O.O Cool!!!!! I love it!!!! Please post more soon!!!!!!

[swallowedhalo]

Thanks so much!

[kitsukikun]

oh come on, anonmous sex is the best! And smoking is undeniably sexy... until you get lung cancer... yeah... so don't smoke, but I'm all for the sex... with protection... *cough

[swallowedhalo]

Thanks so much for reading! I didn't think that Nirvana was so much fashion-oriented than bands like The Sex Pistols or the VK bands. I guess I could spend more time describing clothes, but, unless if they are important to the story (ie a wristwatch hiding suicide attempt scars for example), then it's hard to muster up the will. I'm sure that everyone can imagine what 'normal' teenagers dress like so ^O^!!

[kitsukikun]

meh, clothes usually aren't that important, unless it's like you say, or the occasional noteworthy description. that must be a big wristwatch It wasn't that Nirvana was so fashion oriented, it was that they unintentionally created a new style of fashion.