Breathe

[sasha_dragon]

Title: Breathe
Wordcount: 8420
Rating: NC17
Summary: Jensen helps Jared regain his control after filming “When The Levee Breaks.” A follow up to  Take Care Of You.
Pairing: J2
Warnings: Dom/Sub themes, wax play & breath play
Disclaimer:  These boys are not mine, nor do I believe that they are in this kind of relationship. It’s just nice to have the

Comments

[angelvise87]

Once again, your writing leaves me speechless and amazed at how detailed you are in this one as much as the prequel. Once again, I really enjoyed reading your fics and hope to see more in the future.

-a fellow writer

[sasha_dragon]

*Blushes* once again thank you for your lovely comments, i'm pleased to see that people are enjoying reading these as much as I'm enjoying writing them.

[velvetsun]

Yep. Loved it! The scene with the door made me giggle. And then it was suddenly very warm in my house. =) and now I'm left with a warm and fuzzy feeling because it was so loving and sweet. (you made it difficult for me to decide which icon to use so I settled on this one cause I don't use it much )

great job! Another fav in my 'jewelry' series. ;)

[sasha_dragon]

Thank you, and your comments have made my day. Yes the door scene was made me giggle as well. Thank you for the icon it's gorgeous, and considering it was my very first proper sex scene, I think it went ok.

[a_phoenixdragon]

Dammit, woman, I....

DAMN.

*Whimpers*

*Clutches this fic close*

Again, I thank you...this *takes a shaky breath* was perfection. No other word will do.

*HUGS you tight*

[sasha_dragon]

Oh...ok so it wasn't a fluke then *rubs back of neck* eerrr I erm
*whistles* I...ooohh that icon is just sooo pretty.. I mean really pretty.

So you liked that one as well then? ooookkk I think you're gonna realize soon I'm not that good at this, and I'd hate to dissapoint you.

Thank you again, and that icon is really pretty.

[a_phoenixdragon]

Nope - not a fluke, lol!! All three were favorited, btw!!

Mmmm - do love that icon! And it is shareable, darling!

*Blinks* Dude...*Shakes head* You are damn good at this - and I want you to keep giving me the goods (I'm greedy that way!)

*Cuddles you close*

[sasha_dragon]

Favorited!!! oh! wow...really

That icon is shareable hmmmmmm it's gorgeous I may just snag that if it's ok.

I'll dangle a carrot in front of the muse..or better yet that icon see if that works. *G*

[keerawa]

the sight of come drying on his stomach and chest, like pearls scattered along the fading ruby lines left by the wax. This was crowned at the throat by the ghostly span of Jared’s hand, which was slowly fading away.
Mmmm, shivery hot. I really like how you captured the way they take care of each other, the rush of giving up and being gifted with control, the spice that pain can add to pleasure. And the sweet intimacy of Jared's after-care. Lovely.

[sasha_dragon]

*Blushes* thank you for our comment it's very much appreciated, and I'm so happy that you enjoyed it.

[laedieduske]

Jeebus frikkin gawd that episode just absolutely tears my guts out, thinking of it is painful, watching it reduces me to a trembling, whimpering, teary mess by the time Dean falls unconscious alone in a strange place while we listen to him struggling to draw a breath through the airway his beloved brother just crushed. Yet you're courageous enough to not just keep going there, but to get into their HEADS as they're LIVING these gawdawful moments, and you do it so beautifully it's like crushed glass in my chest every time I try to draw a breath of air. Good gods how do you keep doing this to me? *curls up in a ball*

I love how you have them taking care of each other, too. I love that you realize being a submissive does not mean one cannot take care of their Dom/me. The trust and love in both of these just takes my breath away.

[sasha_dragon]

I'm kinda thinking you may have liked this just a little *G* There was something about that episode that just woudn't let me go and when I started what I eventually called my 'bracelet' verse this seemed lieke an ideal episode to use. What with all the emotional and physical damage suffered it made sense it woudl spill over into the 'real' world somehow.

I' have to ask have you read Take Care Of You? because I'd like to know what you thought as it was my first attempt at this kind of story, I know it's a bit cheeky but I was wondering.

[laedieduske]

Oh yes, I like this just a little. LOL And yes, I started at the beginning with Take Care Of You - I have this bad habit you see...when I find a writer I really enjoy, I tend to sit and sift through their entire library before moving on, so I don't miss anything. The problem with that is, because I'm reading one story after another, I don't want to clutter up inboxes with comment after comment so I generally will only comment on the ones I absolutely cannot resist at all. Even if what I really want is to comment on every single chapter - I just don't want to drive anyone quite that crazy you see. And it sort of paints me as a stalker if I do....so....uh....yeah

[sasha_dragon]

Wow! like I said before devoted! I just hope you're enjoying yourself with these. And when I wrote Take Care Of You I scared myself half to death as I'd never written anything like it before.

All I ask is when you get to the end of my fics, (sorry they're not all in my masterlist) that you'll come by and visit every so often, as I tend to be sort of slow at ye olde writing.