Fic: Roses Red (Series 1, Chap 1, Shades of Ianto 8), Jack/Ianto

[sarcasticbabble]

Chapter Title: Roses Red (Series 1, Chap 1, Shades of Ianto 8)
Author: sarcasticchick
Pairing: Jack/Ianto
Rating: R
Spoilers: TW S1
Fluffers/Betas: lilithilien, fivealiveSummary: The taste of desperation

Comments

[pike2]

I love your writing. Glad you've started another. This was just breath taking.

[sarcasticchick]

oh yes. the fun is just beginning this round *g*

[athousanderrors]

Oh. Just....oh, I love this. Love love love.

Ianto makes me want to kidnap him and make him all better. Hee. And I can't wait to see where you're going with the faeries/Avalon idea.

And oooh Jack finding out about Lisa...*wibbles*

[sarcasticchick]

he's a bit woobie, isn't he?

i want to kidnap him anyways.

wouldn't it be nice to have an ianto all of your own?

[cocoajava]

Oooooh. Wonder if these goosebumps will dissipate soon? *shivers* And yes, I couldn't wait till I got home from work tonight. Bad me. Reading ficcie when I should have been listing employee actions. *cough* I'll do that right now. Am good employee. Mostly.

That was a MOST excellent start to fic-beyond-prologue! It's very apparent you are quite at home playing in the Torchwood sandbox, much to all our delight.

[sarcasticchick]

me and TW-verse?

we like to play together.

jack brings his Tonka truck and ianto brings his shiny red shovel and i sit back and watch them get into sand fights. it's rather cute, actually. ianto gets huffy when sand gets on his clothes and jack gets sand in his hair but they have a grand ol' time making up stories of castles and pterodactyls and villains named owen and gwen.

man, forget working. work can be done at later dates. procrastination, it's not just for the writer's blocked anymore!

[sarcasticchick]

you'd want to use the ghost machine in the hub?

yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesh.

i dunno.

i think that would mess with people's heads.

not that i've ever considered using it.

nope. never. that never was going to play a part. nope.

;)

[mica_chan]

I found out it's a little strange reading the chapters now that the story is following the episodes. I never now what you will do about the things that alread exist and how you'll make everything works.
But your job is brilliant as always and I liked this chapter a lot...even though I didn't understand very well the Faerie part.

Good Lord! I am that kind of person who enters your live journal every single day to see if you updated the story. I was very happy when I saw you finally put a new piece ^_^.

Btw, watched Jack on Doctor Who? What did you think?

[sarcasticchick]

you didn't understand the faeries?

i didn't understand the faeries.

*ggg*

the faeries...i'm sure they meant something. ;)

[sarcasticchick]

i forgot to comment on the doctor who...

yes! i watched utopia the other night. i <3 jack in whichever show. TW is a much more dark jack - i like that a lot. DW jack is a much lighter jack, but he plays so well off the characters that it's hard not to love him too.

i have to say, i really dislike the show doctor who. I KNOW! that's a horrible horrible thing to say. but the show never really hooked me (outside of the few epis i've watched, mostly for research purposes), not like TW has. and i really dislike ten. i know, again, horrible. however, i absolutely adore ten and jack together. the radiation room scene? i think i watched that 420 times. my first thought? the doctor wanks w/ his left hand cause his right hand was bracing him against the door while he talked w/ jack. *g*

"jaaaac-kuh."

that scene will never get old. or less porny.

what'd you think?

[mica_chan]

Well, I am a Doctor Who fan (a new fan, because I never had the opportunity to watch the old series) and fell in love with Jack there. I wait eagerly for Jack coming back since season 1 ending...and loved each second he was on screen on Utopia ^_