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It's Your Song That Sets Me Free - Puck/Rachel - R - Part Four

May 02, 2011 22:08

Title: It's Your Song That Sets Me Free (I Sing It While I Feel I Can't Hold On)
Category: Glee
Genre: Tragedy/Angst/Romance
Ship: Rachel/Puck
Rating: NC17/R
Warning(s): Coarse/Sexual Language, Sexual Content, Themes of Depression, Substance Abuse, Character Death, Suicidal Themes
Word Count: 7,848
Summary: Rachel Berry had no idea what events would ( Read more... )

fic: it's your song, novel - glee - puckleberry, author: sarcastic_fina, ship: puck/rachel, rated: r, status: complete

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sarcastic_fina May 3 2011, 05:46:33 UTC

*hands over tissues*

Thank you. I spent months on this story and I'm still fiddling with it, so I'm really glad my portrayl of giref is on the money.

I hope to have chapter five up within the next few days!

Thanks again for reading/commenting!

bella8876 May 3 2011, 05:47:54 UTC

I hate you. Seriously you like legit f***ing broke me here with this chapter.

I did not heed your warnings for tissues, a mistake I will never make again, rest assured. Every time I see a new chapter for this I tell myself I'm not going to read it because I dont' do sad and every time I break down and read it anyway because I have to know.

I loved Puck's relationship with her dads and his reaction to thier moving. It's not even so much that he's losing Rachel's house, it's that he's losing Rachel's family. They're the dad he never had and to him, them leaving is just like when his dad left him so yeah, seriously f***ing broken.

So I hate you but I love you. Keep up the awesome work.

sarcastic_fina May 3 2011, 06:01:05 UTC

I knew it was going to be heartbreaking, 'cause it had both Puck's grief and her parents, which is why I put an extra warning at the top, lol ( ... )

gabbie217 May 3 2011, 07:12:41 UTC

I didn't start crying until after the promise ring memory. I teared up a little [[especially when her dad said the thing about "she must still be asleep. Maybe I should check on her ( ... )

maipigen May 3 2011, 10:19:00 UTC

okay I tried not reading this for my own piece of mind you know. But because you are the writer, I couldn't keep away anylonger and now it's become clear to me that I hate you...
Seriously, tears are streaming down my face and my love for Karofsky is entirely vanquished. Darn you just write so epically beautiful.

but i still hate you;)
Really well done!

tanzanick May 3 2011, 10:53:45 UTC

This is so sad it's unbelievable!! I sort of wish this was set in a fandom where its quiet commonplace for someone to come back from the dead.