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The War of Fate - NC17 - Chloe/Dean - Chapter Two

Sep 20, 2010 23:02

Title: The War of Fate
Series: Fate - Part II of III
Category: Smallville/Supernatural
Genre: Romance/Angst/Drama/Humor/Action
Ship: Chloe/Dean
Rating: NC17
Word Count: 4,156
Summary: Following the loss of his brother, Dean vows to keep his promise and live the apple-pie life with Chloe, but God has other ideas. Trying to put himself together, Dean sets ( Read more... )

author: sarcastic_fina, series: fate, novel - sv/spn - chlean, ship: chloe/dean, fic: the war of fate

Comments 19

juju84 September 22 2010, 21:52:21 UTC

YaY!!!!! New chapter!
It was awesome! I so loved Bobby/Chloe arguments! lol! They make a good team!
Dean's a dumbass I so want to smack him! Uh, but love him anyway:)
Hope to see more from you soon!

sarcastic_fina September 26 2010, 06:27:01 UTC

^_^ Much Bobby/Chloe bickering to come, I assure you!

Dean's confused and hurt and he'll continue his dumbassery, haha. Having her away only seems to be making it worse, but relief is nie! (ish)

Update to come very soon - tonight, lol.

saurina September 23 2010, 21:24:28 UTC

I've really been looking forward to reading this chapter and as always you didn't disappoint!

Bobby and Chloe are great together, their banter always make me laugh. As for Dean, my heart goes out to the poor guy, it's not easy being Dean at the moment, to many conflicting feelings. But the one I was really looking forward to, was Devin. I know it was only a introduction to her, but the vote is in; I like her!! She seems to be a cool lady and I hope she's one of the good guys, because I could definitely see her being a part of Team Free Will *wink, nudge*

sarcastic_fina September 26 2010, 06:28:24 UTC

I've really been looking forward to reading this chapter and as always you didn't disappoint!

Very glad to hear that! *phew*

Writing Chloe and Bobby's banter has been really fun and flows easy. Writing Dean's anguish is a lot harder, but definitely interesting.

Ah, Devin, she is so awesome to write. A little more into her character next chapter and then some startling twists. :)

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Re: So glad to be back! sarcastic_fina September 26 2010, 06:32:37 UTC

saw the Smallville and Supernatural premieres tonight and I instantly thought of you. You know you've got it back when you're watching the show and wondering how and where Chloe could fit in. lol. So flattering! :D ( ... )

ashbail256 September 25 2010, 08:37:03 UTC

Can't wait to see where this is goin'. Dean's breakin' my heart a lil' bit. I still love it anyway. Update soon please.

sarcastic_fina September 26 2010, 06:29:06 UTC

I'm glad!

Oh, he's breaking my heart too! Unfortunately, it's not soon to change. What relief that comes soon will be fleeting for awhile yet. :(

Updating tonight! :)

water333 September 15 2012, 13:24:15 UTC

WILL never LIKE an OC and I don't like her!

This part of the story is too depressing..I mean, where's the so called 'soul mate' love? It just disappears due to SAM not being here..

It really doesn't matter what I say but really, an OC!! URGH!

sarcastic_fina September 15 2012, 17:47:11 UTC

I'm just going to reply to all your comments here ( ... )