The War of Fate - NC17 - Chloe/Dean - Chapter Two
Title: The War of Fate
Series: Fate - Part II of III
Category: Smallville/Supernatural
Genre: Romance/Angst/Drama/Humor/Action
Ship: Chloe/Dean
Rating: NC17
Word Count: 4,156
Summary: Following the loss of his brother, Dean vows to keep his promise and live the apple-pie life with Chloe, but God has other ideas. Trying to put himself together, Dean sets ( Read more... )
1. There was a warning for sexual content. Foreplay is sexual content. There are readers who don't read those parts and intend to skip over them, this way they knew it was coming. I get that you didn't like how long it took for them to have sex but repeatedly complaining about it wasn't going to change anything. The story is finished and it was necessary to a plot line that is still developing.
2. There are a number of own characters in this second part of the series that are all necessary to the plot or in some ways just secondary characters that bring wisdom or humor. The list of friends the Winchesters have was short so I made up my own characters. I like them.
3. The soulmate connection wasn't lost. But when Dean gets depressed he pushes people away and keeps them at a distance. He's trying to deal with his brothers presumably permanent death and that he's stuck in the devil's cage. He's not magically okay with everything because of Chloe but as the story goes on he does learn he has to work on his communication skills. He still loves Chloe, he's just consumed with grief. And I'll remind you that I do warn that this story is much darker. You chose to read on anyway.
4. Lastly, I'm confused why you're stilly reading. Heart of Fate was by no means short but all of your reviews thus far have been complaints. If you don't like my stories then please, don't feel pressured to keep reading. They're obviously not what you're looking for.
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