The War of Fate - NC17 - Chloe/Dean - Chapter Two

[sarcastic_fina]

Title: The War of Fate
Series: Fate - Part II of III
Category: Smallville/Supernatural
Genre: Romance/Angst/Drama/Humor/Action
Ship: Chloe/Dean
Rating: NC17
Word Count: 4,156
Summary: Following the loss of his brother, Dean vows to keep his promise and live the apple-pie life with Chloe, but God has other ideas. Trying to put himself together, Dean sets

Comments

[brisbanite]

squeeeeeeeee! Update!
Love the snark+gruff that the Chloe and Bobby team produce. And poor Dean... how you've written his grief reads very true to the character.
Can't wait for the next chapter (but happy little camper in the meantime after that installment)

[sarcastic_fina]

Love the snark+gruff that the Chloe and Bobby team produce.

Me too! I love these two together - I find they make a great team to banter between!

Next chapter will be up very soon... as in I'm just re-reading for typing errors now, haha.

[kellou24]

Great chapter and I want more of this Devin character. For some reason I want her and Sam (devil or human) to be a thing.

Also loved the Chloe and Bobby bickering and getting to see Dean's perspective in this chapter.

[sarcastic_fina]

More Devin to come!! I really enjoyed writing her. She's fun and snarky! :)

More of Dean's perspective next chapter as well, and Chloe/Bobby bickering, haha! ^_^

[vamp1987]

Chloe and Bobby are so cute! They really are like a father/daughter bickering set.

[sarcastic_fina]

I adore that about them. It's so easy to write their bickering, it's just awesome!

[purple_moon123]

Love this so much!!! Chloe and Bobby are just so freaking hilarious!!!

Between you and fonapola I'm not that excited for the show to return. I love it, but I love your stories more!!!!

[sarcastic_fina]

I love writing Chloe and Bobby bickering - much more of it to come!

I'm happy the show's back on, it encouraged me to get back into writing. Next update will be very soon - 'cause I'm rereading for errors now and then posting, lol.

[camfan4ever]

TWO DAYS!!

Sorry, had to get that out.

Amazing chapter! Poor Dean, I could feel his pain, amazing way you described it. Loved the bickering between Bobby and Chloe, they're really father and daughter. Can't wait for more!

[sarcastic_fina]

It's arrived! :) I'm happy to see it's back on, it gives me a clearer idea of where I'm going with both The War of Fate and the last installment of the series, The Future of Fate.

Dean will be in much pain, but it'll be interesting to write and read, I hope. lol

I'm so glad to hear so many enjoyed the father/daughter bickering between Chloe and Bobby. It's so fun and easy to write it's just become natural between them! :)