Sensual Red Lights- fan fiction- gazette/ alice nine/ d'espairsray-10/?

[sarcasm_chan]

Title:  Sensual Red Lights
author: Me..? Sarcasm_chan
warning: well, ...yaoi and vulgar language sometimes... english is not my mother-tongue..not beta-read
pairings: ShouxHiroto, SagaxShou, ToraxHiroto , UruhaxReita, ReitaxUruha, RukixUruha, AoixUruha (beware of the one-sided ones)
disclaimers: unfortunately, their manager didn't want to sell them to

Comments

[green_wellies]

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Wow. This story is so full of awesome drama! It's great! ^^ I'm really liking the Shou x Saga story more and more each day! And Aoi is starting to freak me out with his plans and such...

I love that Uruha and Reita are all giddy and happy; it's cute! XDD I can't wait for the next chapter! This story is too good! ^^

[sarcasm_chan]

oh my thanks! =D
^^ I am very happy you enjoyed, but partial sorry to tell you: we are heading for the ending XDD
And Rei and Uru aren't that aware of each others feelings (yet), and happy is not what they are (yet) XDD;;; but maybe it will come!
Aoi just IS freaky! XDD
only one or maybe 2 chaps to go!
Thanks for commenting! ^--^v

[green_wellies]

Yeah... maybe giddy and confused would have been a better choice of words.

But looking at their "relationship" in the beginning and looking at how it has progresses to now makes it seem (to me) like they're already together! ^^ Oh well..

[sarcasm_chan]

hahah XD yeah maybe. Though I can promise you that Aoi and Ruki will do everything they can not to make that happen XD;;

[neko_chan_1993]

ok.
NOW everybody loves uruha.
and NOW aois getting seriously freaky.
and NOW shou and saga know how each other feel
and NOW saga will (hopefully) stop being a butt XD
and NOW tora and hiroto will get what's coming to them
and NOW...who else is in the story? XD
OH YEAH.
and NAO...woops! typo..
SPEAKING OF NAO...
who the heck's he goin out with?? XD

2 MORE CHAPTERS!??!!?

aaww...come on! that's not NEARLY enough to do this story justice! (especially at the lousy pace you update at XD jkjjjk...)

i am hoping for a side story~ you know it~ i want it~ now~ NOW~ NOOOWW!!!

[sarcasm_chan]

*LOL*

XD AOI ALWAYS WAS THIS FREAKY!!!
and Shou and Saga still have their problems ne? They're not together yet >D
XD AND SAGA JUST IS AN ASS, HOW CAN HE STOP BEING ONE? XDDD
Hm, Tora isn't that guilty, he didn't really mean to hurt Saga or Shou, he was just like: "Well, only cause Hiroto is my friend *shrug*"
XDD hahahah XD;; well Nao isn't really going out with someone, maybe he has a nice girlfriend?

maybe even 1 XDD

LOUSY PACE OF MY UPDATING? >.> be happy I DO update! *indignant* (j/k so don't take this too serious ^--^v)

XDD;; a sidestory about WHO then? Everyone's problems are explained and solved in the main story already XD

[neko_chan_1993]

XD srsly? i never noticed! XDDD
yeah, but it woudl be SO nice if they WERE together, ne? XD
XD AWW BUT SAGA'S NOT AN ASS!!! HOW CAN YOU BE SOMETHING YOU DON'T HAVE??? XDXDXD
Yeah, but stil...like my sister,,running her big mouth XD
nope, nao has no girlfriend
or boyfriend.
or anyone...
OMG HES LIEK ME!!! ALL ALOONNEEE~~~ <(@_@)>
how can i just be happy with the fact that you DO update if not YEAR APARTS?!?!? *is indignant too* (XD were silly)

hm...XD shouXsaga sidestory!!!! jsut for the heckuvit

[sarcasm_chan]

... >.<;;
SAGA DOES HAVE AN ASS! AND I CAN TELL >D
XD;; who says Nao is all alone? maybe he is married and has kids in my story. IF I SAY HE HAS A GIRLFRIEND HE HAS A GIRLFRIEND DAMNIT! XDDDDD I am the writer REMEMBER? XD
and I am all alooonneee too so no complaining <.<
... The last few times I've updated with only 2 or 5 days in between >.> THAT IS SHORT!

...but almost half of the chapters are about SagaxShou. It's not really needed ne?

[a_chama]

Kysaaaa~ the story gets more complex! I can't believe that Hiroto is like that! T___Tand here I thought he was a good guy X_X Make me sad... but at least with that Shou saw that Saga actually cared for Shou! I hope they'll finally end up together X___X because it would be rather unfair especially since Shou doesn't seem to be interested in Hiroto anymore XD looks like Hiroto missed his chance XDDDDD

And it seems Aoi get's creepier every time him and his crazy plans XDDDD I hope he get's stoped... I mean yes Ruki's a bastard... but I can actually pity him while Aoi has no remorse or guilt or anything that makes him piuty worthy.... *sweat*

And the part with Uruha and Reita was sooooooo cute! It was really sweet and I can't wait to watch it grow between them! It'll be nice to see it evolves!

It's been a really great fic so far and I really look forward to the next update ^^

[sarcasm_chan]

hahahah XD I told you to put some questionmarks at Hiroto's behaviour, now Shou still has to know he did that though.
And maybe Shou saw it, but what if Saga continues denying it? It is a complicated relationship XDD;

Hahahah, Aoi always was this creepy, though the only thing that I want to say about it: He doesn't physically hurt people, only mentally. And he isn't a "real" stalker (he thinks)he has to act like one so it will seem like Ruki is one...XD
admit it: Aoi is a smart guy. Since his plans are kind of working, ne?

hahah XD They're not together yet! Watch it, the Creepy-King Aoi won't allow that to happen! And what about Ruki? XD;;

thank youu! I'll try to update soon!

[lady_monochrome]

DRAMA! XDD

As I thought, Aoi's insane . . . There he goes again with his "evil" plan. *snicker*

Go ReixUru-ness!! XDDDD

Ok, what Hiroto did, Bad squirrel, BAD! *slaps Hiropon then hugs him* Sorry about that.

Go Shou!! GO GET SAGA!! AAAHH!!

Gotta love all the drama in this chapter ~__^

[sarcasm_chan]

hahaha XD YAY ANOTHER DRAMA-LOVER! ^--^v *gives you cookies for that*

*grin* Aoi's evil plan just grows bigger and more complicated every time when something develops in Uruha's life X3;;;

hahah yay! ^--^

HIROTO WON'T GET NUTS FOR THIS!

hahah yeah Shou, RUN, RUN LIKE THE WIND!

X3 yay! thanks! I'll try to update soon

[lady_monochrome]

I totally lol'd at all that. XDD

Yay! *sings and claps* Up Date soon! Up Date Soon!!

[sarcasm_chan]

^---^ happy I appear to make you laugh XDDD;;;; at least someone is amused by my retardness

XD;;; that won'tmake me write faster ya know...

[murd3r4lyf3]

grrr..hiroto is such an idiot and a bastard...playing???
*punches a chipmunk bollie to pieces*

Aoi is like..scary man.dude.and so is Ruki...
*wails!!!!
but Uruha was like..omg shoes awesome and Reita is like..the same thing...
nao is like...mad fluffy here

[sarcasm_chan]

*nodnod* he is a very, very bad squirrel.

XD Aoi always has been scary man. dude. Same for Ruki! XD;;
X3 let's hope Uru and Rei end up together then ne?
hahah XD yeah he was. But though the best friend Saga could wish for.