Sensual Red Lights- fan fiction- gazette/ alice nine/ d'espairsray-10/?

[sarcasm_chan]

Title:  Sensual Red Lights
author: Me..? Sarcasm_chan
warning: well, ...yaoi and vulgar language sometimes... english is not my mother-tongue..not beta-read
pairings: ShouxHiroto, SagaxShou, ToraxHiroto , UruhaxReita, ReitaxUruha, RukixUruha, AoixUruha (beware of the one-sided ones)
disclaimers: unfortunately, their manager didn't want to sell them to

Comments

[gazerockyo]

YAY!! the story moves forwards!! ayayayyayaya!! *huggles and gives cookies* be a good little girl and gimme gimme!! xD ps i like evil aoi!

[sarcasm_chan]

hahah XD *munches on cookies* I'll do my best ^--^v Try to update soon and stuff X3 but with my job now and school coming and stuff, I'll probably have to hurry... .__.;;

P.S: Like your ava X3 He looks really cool there XD

[gazerockyo]

o.o;;;i should be studying too XD

of course he does...Hizumi looks like he's so totally owns us all!! xD

[sarcasm_chan]

well in a week school will start again for me, so right now, no studying (yet)

XDD he does indeed. Or more like : "that sounds interesting. Proceed."

[warmeyes]

OHHH DRAMA!!!
I want to keep reading!
You should... you should write a book! xD i would read it LOL

Ehem... well its moving kinda slow xD

LOL i cant choose between ShouxSaga or ShouxHiroto >,<
so okay ill let you decide *giggles*

Aaaand cant wait to see what is Aois plan and what will happen >.o

8D

[sarcasm_chan]

hahahahh thank you!
*gives you cookies* X3;; But I don't think I'll write a book. And definitely NOT about a fanfic XDD;;;
though I could always change names of course, BUT STILL! XDD

hmm after what Hiroto did to Shou? I actually don't think he'll be that good for him...
But at the other hand Saga wasn't that nice all the time either, but that's a bit different though ^^;;
Now I don't know it anymore either ;___;'XD you'll see what the end-up pairing will be.

But you know Aois plan already right? .__.;; XD;; I kinda explained it in earlier chapters and in this one a bit too. But if you mean: His plan to split up Uru and Reita: You'll seeeee!~
XD;; thanks for commenting! I'll try to update soon! ^----^v

[warmeyes]

omg! Cookies! xD yay! ^^
well if you do write a book tell me lol xD

well hiroto hasnt been the best, but i think i on sagas side xD

and yes i mean how is he going to do with reita lol!

^__^ aww cant wait! =D

[sarcasm_chan]

haha I won't count on me writing a book XD;;;

^^ to be honest: I think I am on Saga's side too XD

XD lol, well as I said: You'll see ^^
I have started writing the 11th chap, I expect itto be done in a few days. I am not sure if it will be the last, if not: There'll be one more.

[hana_chan92]

Aaaa-a!
So many things are going on now OwO

Can't waite the next chapter! *jumps*
And I don't have any idea how you can make up so many plans and great couples.
I love you *huggles* ^.^

[sarcasm_chan]

^------^ thank you <33

I'll try to update fast X3 since *puke* School is starting again next week T-T and I want to end this fic before School will start
I don't know where I get the ideasfrom either O__O;; but I am always afraid things get too complicated to be honest, so I am happy you enjoy my scary ideas! ^---^
*huggles back*

[ahega]

aaaaw~ I really like the development between Shou, Saga and Hiroto xD actually.. I do care more for their story then for Uruha, Aoi, Reita and Ruki (cause of the thing I wrote in the last comment -> Uruha= everybody's darling)

Haha.. but Hirotos trick..lol I think that's a rather common one but often working |D
Saga needs a little more courage! Instead of running away he should fight ò.ó

And Aoi plans to play even more dirty xD'' oh my~ I pity his victims

Btw, I'm burning your CD today ^___^ you need to write me your address <3333~

[sarcasm_chan]

XDD haha yeah I understand what you mean...
I also didn't really like the idea everyone likes Uruha, but well..if that wouldn't be, I would have gotten into several problems wih the story and should've thought of way too complicated reasons for Aoi's actions and stuff, that wouldn't be a wise thing to do ^^;; so I chose the easy way, and that ended up with 3 guys liking Uruha...

XD it's true that Hiroto had a common strategy, thats also why i used it XD but it stays pretty mean ne?
Saga was just really, really confused, he knew that if he would have fought, Hiroto would deny everything and Shou would get very angry. Plus: he probably doesn't want to hurt Shou more than he already did.

XDD hahah but his victims are known ne? Ruki, Uruha and now Reita is a new one. And his plans are indeed more dirty...I wonder if you know what he is planning on doing? X3;;

Whiieeee! THANK YOU!! *huggles* ^-----^ I'll give you it...eh...by msn?

[blacksoul12012]

WOW!!!! I really, really, really like your story!!!!(I'll comment now for the whole story so far since I just finished reading all and I don't want to spam your inbox^^)
at first I thought that would be a 'normal' story but that is just genious...I like how you involved more and more characters (and especially the way you introduced them) and the story gets more complicated (in a good way^^)
you really know how to make me banned to a story xDD
I was living with all the persons and made wild gestures while reading it (gladly I don't have a camera^^)
and I like the fact that now everything could happen...I'm sooo curious what comes next!!!!!
*gives cookies*

[sarcasm_chan]

wow gee, thanks so much! ^---^
I actually dunno what to say, I am flattered! XDD I am very happy my story seems to satisfie you! And I am also very glad you liked it X3
I am sorry if you expected some more NC17, since I did put it in the rating, but well..as you noticed in teh few scenes there were; I pretty suck at NC17 XDD I am better at drama ( to say so myself...)
anyway: THANK YOU SOOO MUCH! ^---^ I hope you'll like the next chaps too! *munches on cookies*