What's wrong with this picture?

[sarabellae]

Comments

[dakini_grl]

I think stance looks pretty good, he's just got to get the leading hand down and those thumbs on top. What's his handicap?

[mrplanet4]

His stance should have his leading foot out and perpendicular to his back foot. The sword should be held so the hilt it paralell with the back of his hand and pointed off to the side instead of in front of his body, making a slimmer target for his opponent.
Also that...eraser? should be armed as well to make this a fair fight.

[sarabellae]

It's a domino.