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othermewriter April 3 2011, 20:20:40 UTC
Lovely lovely lovely lovely! I adore the way you finished up with the page from the journal. These two so deserve each other and the joy that comes from traveling together.

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sapphire_child April 4 2011, 13:57:23 UTC
I had to have a ray of hope somewhere at the end after all the sad and angst right?

Thank you darling.

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glorious_clio April 3 2011, 22:11:15 UTC
Ohhh, now that it's over, I'm sad to see it. But this was an excellent story and well worth the wait. :)

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sapphire_child April 4 2011, 13:57:10 UTC
I'm glad you thought so ^_^

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professor_spork April 3 2011, 23:15:27 UTC
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*melts*

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sapphire_child April 4 2011, 13:56:39 UTC
Sporky, your comments never cease to make me beam like a complete and utter dork at my computer screen.

Mesupposes this means you might've liked it? ;)

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3pirouette April 3 2011, 23:45:31 UTC
Guh...LOVE IT! So simple while still being really, really in character with what you've created! Absolutely worth the April Fools Day misdirection! :)

And did you say more in this 'verse? Because I think that makes me supremely happy!

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sapphire_child April 4 2011, 13:56:44 UTC
I wanted this to be simple so I'm glad it came across that way. Because really, they love each other, it's as simple as that really when you boil it down.

Haha, glad I have been forgiven for my transgressions :P I did feel extraordinarily bad about posting it you know.

Oh yes. There are a handful of deleted scene-y bits and some follow up ficlets brewing as well as a boatload of tumblr graphics to be posted!

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maniacalshen April 4 2011, 00:16:39 UTC
I like your explanation of all the time the Doctor took.

“I get it you know,” she began, studiously not looking him in the eye. “Why you can’t...why you won’t...oh you know.

Lol, yes, Rose. That exactly.

This is a sweet ending, and the mockup of the book at the end throws us just enough of a bone in regards to their feelings for each other. It wasn't yet an appropriate time for them to go any further, especially the Doctor. I do think this story cries out for a sequel, though!

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sapphire_child April 4 2011, 13:56:41 UTC
Of course it was something daft and a bit stupid like he couldn't work an answering machine :P oh Doctor...

This is a sweet ending, and the mockup of the book at the end throws us just enough of a bone in regards to their feelings for each other. It wasn't yet an appropriate time for them to go any further, especially the Doctor. I do think this story cries out for a sequel, though!
Let's just say that the Doctor doesn't quite hit on Christmas the first time around :P

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