Comments | sansunparapluie: I would rather be a bird without wings -- i

sansunparapluie

I would rather be a bird without wings -- i

Jan 01, 2013 19:45

I would rather be a bird without wings (than a bird without feet); Jinki/Minho; R-ish
note: because the former cannot take flight whereas the latter cannot alight. (yes, I rhymed that on purpose. /lame) this is for cheese_on_sauce and I know it's not what you were thinking of when you asked for au. ;A; the sci-fi was accidental, nobody dies, and jinki eats ( Read more... )

f: shinee, c: taemin, p: jinki/minho, c: jinki, c: jonghyun, c: minho

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kayjay1212 June 8 2013, 02:14:48 UTC

Sooo, I dont know if I missed something while reading this (which is highly likely since I cant seem to stop being exhausted these days) but I dont think I understand what Minho did that caused Jinki to get hurt. Why is Jinki hurt? Why is he a ghost if Taemin is not? Doesnt being a ghost just mean that they are unmarked? So, why is it something that would cause Jinki not to want Tae to see him?

I feel like an idiot for being so confused.

I really really love your writing. Even though I had a hard time understanding this one, just the way you write, the way you break things apart and space them is really beautiful. Everything just feels very smooth, if that makes any sense.

sansunparapluie June 8 2013, 03:03:55 UTC

hey love (❁´◡`❁)

RE: the accident - I'll quote from the story and then explain ( ... )

kayjay1212 June 8 2013, 03:24:42 UTC

I realized after you explained that I already knew this. I fell asleep last night while reading this (at freaking 10 PM!!!!!!) and so when I went back to read today, I managed not to remember the details of what I read last night. Thanks for the thorough explanation though <333 Ill comment on the 2nd part now.