FIC: The Ringmaster, 1/4

Nov 05, 2009 20:15

Title: The Ringmaster 1/4
Rating: nc-17 overall
Character/Pairing: Kirk/McCoy
Wordcount: approx 2,500 words complete
Summary: AU set sometime in the 19C before medical hygiene and dermal regenerators, McCoy, the circus hobo clown is summoned by ringmaster, Kirk, who needs some medical attention.
Warnings: There’s a fleeting appearance by a snake ( Read more... )

nc-17, au, ringmaster, kirk/mccoy, masterlist

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cards_slash November 5 2009, 23:35:56 UTC
the thing is, you do feel a sequel brewing. you can smell it brewing too--and it smells fine.

i loved it! omg i loved it! (I love UST too, especially between the Jones boys because there's just something about them. srsly.)

the outfits were so ridiculously perfect. oh my clothes!kink is so happy right now.

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sangueuk November 6 2009, 05:43:18 UTC
the outfits were so ridiculously perfect. Why, thank you! That's what always strikes me when I see movies set around this period, everything seems so heavy and sumptuous.

Thrilled you liked it, thanks! This was a great challenge. I just need to read all the other pieces now.

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cards_slash November 6 2009, 10:40:11 UTC
my clothes kink *shivers*. i added you to round-up list for the october meme. w00t and teh yay!

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lindmere November 6 2009, 00:28:31 UTC
OMG, that was hilarious and hot at the same time!

“I don’t like clowns,” Kirk said suddenly. “My mom’s second husband was a clown.”

That made me laugh out loud. The very idea of McCoy as a clown is too wonderful.

I'm a circusophobe but the ambiance was absolutely wonderful--dark and raffish and slightly wicked, with Kirk in buckskin pants with shoulder-length hair carrying a whip, ahhh.

And yes, I'm with cards_slash; this demands a sequel!

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sangueuk November 6 2009, 05:45:33 UTC
The very idea of McCoy as a clown is too wonderful - it does just work, doesn't it? I may have to thank Crusty the Clown on the Simpsons for even believing it could happen!

Sequel? I think this one's going to write itself - these boys have unfinished business.;D

Thank you for reading!

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secretsolitaire November 6 2009, 01:10:15 UTC
Good lord, that was as hot as any full-out porn. *sweats*

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sangueuk November 6 2009, 05:47:20 UTC
Hot? Thank you because I wasn't sure if it was 'working' - after all, who's to say what I find hot as hell is going to work for someone else? Thanks for letting me know cos it makes a sequel more likely!

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lulabel November 6 2009, 01:51:34 UTC
Damn, that was pretty much the definition of SMOLDERING.

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sangueuk November 6 2009, 05:48:16 UTC
It was fun writing it, so I'm glad you liked it, thanks!

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nikki4noo November 6 2009, 02:15:28 UTC
Oh now that was a slow burn. I'm with the others, sequel please!

Loved the images and the whole feel of it back in the 19th Century. Men in suits make me *swoon*. All trussed up and many layers that are just so delightful to take off and reveal little bits at a time.

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sangueuk November 6 2009, 05:50:25 UTC
Woe, this sentence alone, All trussed up and many layers that are just so delightful to take off and reveal little bits at a time. had me reaching for a fan! The clothes are to die for, I know!

Thanks for letting me know you like it and for wanting a sequel! *blushes* I'm sure I'll get to it soon. I need to know what happens next or, should I say, in which position?

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nikki4noo November 6 2009, 05:58:02 UTC
After writing the boys trying on suits together for one of my fics, and I had Bones teaching Jim how to tie a tie, you mention suits and those two and my brain goes to a really happy place!

Take all the time you need to get it right. :D We will be waiting to lap it right up.

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cards_slash November 6 2009, 10:39:17 UTC
whut whut? suits? ties? where is this fic? (says the random person interrupting a conversation...*cough*)

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