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FIC: The Ringmaster, 4b/4 - final part

Jan 02, 2011 16:48

Title: The Ringmaster 4b/4
Rating: nc-17
Character/Pairing: Kirk/McCoy
Wordcount: approx 9,550 words (this part)
Summary: A circus AU set sometime in the late 19C. McCoy, escaping his failed marriage, has fallen in with Enterprise Circus and works as a hobo clown, as well as crew and animal doctor when needed. This part takes up a few months ( Read more... )

nc-17, space_wrapped, au, ringmaster, kik/mccoy, angst, masterlist

Comments 67

jimpage363 January 2 2011, 18:03:26 UTC

I really loved this series. I especially like how Jim is willing to follow whatever his desire is and how he slowly coaxes it out of McCoy. The ending was pure glory - hot and dirty and loving.

sangueuk January 3 2011, 10:00:32 UTC

Thank you so much for reading! I'm so glad the dynamic between Jim and McCoy worked, especially the sex at the end which I wanted to feel like a 'transformation' in some way and I love the way you sum it up:hot and dirty and loving. - job done! :D

lidane January 2 2011, 18:10:23 UTC

I haven't started reading this part yet, but I swear my iPod knows just what I needed to hear right now to get me in the mood. This song just came on. Strangely appropriate, no?

OK. Now it's time to read. :)

sangueuk January 3 2011, 10:01:32 UTC

That song was perfect - you must be in tune with the planets or something! ;D Hope you liked it in the end!

Oh, sweet jesus! vivid_moment January 2 2011, 18:14:55 UTC

In the distance, you might hear a very faint "guh", followed by a loud thud.
That would be me, falling over.

I loved this verse so, so much; what you had them do and say was just - Perfectly Wonderful! *le big, deep sigh*

Re: Oh, sweet jesus! sangueuk January 3 2011, 10:06:06 UTC

Even your comment 'header' had me grinning with happiness *squishes* and then you sent me a virtual gift! THANK YOU SO MUCH! I'm overwhelmed and so pleased you enjoyed it! It makes all the hours working on this worthwhile that I'm making readers 'fall over' ;D!

Re: Oh, sweet jesus! vivid_moment January 3 2011, 17:12:58 UTC

Job done then, if I got you grinning with happiness *squishes back* aww, you're welcomes, I'm kinda sucky at feeback/comments so when something really makes me go *whahoohoo! thud!* I hunt out a gift ;) Lol, I tend to get another bruise or two from reading (or seeing) something fantabulous, and THIS certainly was ♥!

avictoriangirl January 2 2011, 18:16:53 UTC

First of all, I can't believe that you dedicated this chapter to me! I'm so flattered! *blushes and squeezes you tight* And second of all: OH. MY. GOD. You have left me breathless. I love the tone of this, the entire thing had a dream like quality to it. And OMG, the smokin' hot sex at the end! *melts* This was perfect, bb. Just perfect. ♥!!!

sangueuk January 3 2011, 10:09:19 UTC

You're so very welcome *squeezes back* - you know how much I adore the banner -- it gives me a buzz every time I glimpse it! I'm glad the mood in the Absinthe House worked for you -- I wanted to make it very trippy, but real so the sex was very manly-man but romantic (because I'm a sap)-- seems from your comment I managed it! *happy dance*

ennyousai January 2 2011, 18:42:18 UTC

I love the sense of place and time in this story, from start to finish. Very nicely done. :)

sangueuk January 3 2011, 10:10:40 UTC

Oh thank you! I put a lot of work into conveying the period so it's a relief it worked - thank you for reading! :D