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borgmama1of5 January 25 2013, 05:28:54 UTC
I am still stuck in this 'verse today trying to imagine what might happen next.

Which, considering last night's episode was in competition for my brain, and your 'verse won, says something :)

And NICE illustration!

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sandymg January 25 2013, 05:30:32 UTC
That was quick :) Thanks for all and for your enthusiasm toward this verse. Oh, and thanks for complimenting my feeble attempt at art!

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ayane42 January 25 2013, 06:26:57 UTC
wow, just wonderful as always!!

i just love this verse!!!

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sandymg January 25 2013, 14:33:05 UTC
Thanks so much. Glad you continue to enjoy it.

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apieceofcake January 25 2013, 14:04:23 UTC
Grrr..again at his mum! I love what Dana said about the fireflys :-)

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sandymg January 25 2013, 14:34:59 UTC
Yeah, mummy's not so nice :) But she is fun to write! Thanks so much. I was proud of myself when I came up with that fairy bit (and it was before SPN aired)! ;)

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beelikej January 26 2013, 19:38:00 UTC
Hadn't read this verse before but after being introduced to slightly broken Jensen and his sad past with this latest installment, I couldn't stop reading and dived into the whole verse to read all the parts. It hurt, but it was wonderful.

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sandymg January 26 2013, 20:15:32 UTC
Thanks for giving this verse a try. I'm curious as to whether it makes any sense reading it with this first as there's no intro. I wrote past indifferent seagulls first and all the other stories were written around it.

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beelikej January 27 2013, 18:40:41 UTC
Oh, it absolutely works chronologically:) Especially this first part gives a lot of information about the early relationship between Jensen and his mom, which makes his state of mind in the other stories easier to understand.
I suspect I would have had to fill in some blanks if I had started with the story that was written first. Which is also a wonderful way to get to know the characters, but just a different reading experience. I suspect you already had some of the scenes from his childhood in mind when you created the verse, because the transitions in between the stories feel very natural.

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sandymg January 27 2013, 22:04:06 UTC
I love the feedback. Thanks!! I do have so much of Jensen's back history for this story in my head. And much of his mother's as well!

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tcs1121 January 27 2013, 02:46:31 UTC
Great installment to the Beach 'verse. So glad to see you're still adding to it.

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sandymg January 27 2013, 02:49:51 UTC
Thanks! Glad you liked it. :)

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