Haven't Met You Yet, 2/3, RPS, J2 AU, [PG]

[sandymg]

Comments

[tmn1966]

Ooh, I really like the newspapers! That’s awesome! :)

It was such a melancholy meeting between Justin and Jared, missing what was known and comfortable, yet knowing there wasn’t anything there. I especially thought this line reflected that:

Warm brown eyes that were almost … almost enough.

I very much enjoyed glimpsing into Jared’s writing process. Loved how he talked things out with Jensen.

And haha… Misha a yenta. :)

I think your wording is as gorgeous as ever, like here:

Modern rap. Pulsing and echoing, like the beating of his heart within his lonely chest.

And I am drawn to this one, too:

He’d tried three times total. And each time left him cold and shivering and aching for something he couldn’t identify. Couldn’t really name. Just knew it was a hole he couldn’t fill.Sometimes I feel that way when I wake up form a dream I can’t really remember, just this sense of missing something

[sandymg]

Thanks. I have to admit the fave part of this story to me is everything after real Jensen appears. I don't like the parts as much where they aren't together. I'm glad you found it funny. I always find funny such a challenge. I'm delighted you laughed.

[sandymg]

Thank you. I have to admit, writing the part where 'real' Jensen shows up was the most fun.

[apieceofcake]

Dude,” he said turning back around. “Your ghost just got in a car and drove away.”

*laughing* That really struck me and then there was the confusion between them which was adorable ;-)

[sandymg]

Thanks so much! Glad you found it funny.

[miffyarana]

Really gorgeous

[sandymg]

Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.