Comments | sammistarr: Drabble--Rumours of My Death

sammistarr

Drabble--Rumours of My Death

Jan 27, 2009 12:22

From the prompts at blackpearlsails
Title: Ghosts
Rating: PG (overtones of death, death of a widely-beloved character)
Word Count: 375
Characters: Jack and a surprise (guess who! *g*)
Disclaimer: Characters belong to the Mouse!
Summary: Response to the prompt "Rumours of my Death"--post-AWE; Jack meets a ghost from his past.

( Ghosts )

jack, drabble, beckett, potc

Comments 15

stealmybike January 27 2009, 18:54:27 UTC

I liked this very much! A very haunting but interesting conversation between the pair.

“But you will not.” I always loved your Beckett, he was very evil, as usual. Your rendition of Jack was fantastic as well!

Jack gave a cavalier shrug. “Comes with the territory.”. Bloody brilliant :)

sammistarr January 30 2009, 01:11:08 UTC

Aww, thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it, and thank you for loving my Beckett (I'm quite fond of yours as well *hint hint* *g*)

stealmybike January 30 2009, 01:44:16 UTC

Hehehe! *g* So glad you like mine as well :)

geekmama January 27 2009, 20:40:33 UTC

Oooh, that gave me chills. Poor Jack.

sammistarr January 30 2009, 01:11:54 UTC

I always feel bad whenever I do anything like this to Jack!

Thanks for reading!

casey_leigh January 27 2009, 22:03:19 UTC

Homg! I have goosebumps!

(And, uh. . .why is it that Beckett is even hotter when he's a gimpy ghost?)

sammistarr January 30 2009, 01:12:41 UTC

Yay, goosebumps!

(And because Beckett is hot no matter what--and the angst just fuels sexy-time)

mary684 January 28 2009, 01:38:09 UTC

ACK! So CREEPY!

“You ruined me,” Beckett whispered. -- that right there was absolutely chilling! You always do him such justice, just all the right elements of nasty/smart/witty/evil -- and still you give him just a little humanity underneath it all -- really well done because without that, he'd just be a pointless charicature -- but with that little bit -- man, it just illicits all kinds of conflicting emotions around him. And this piece is no exception. Gotta love Jack with his cavalier shrug but the bedraggled Beckett takes center stage here. I don't feel sorry for him, but I can certainly understand how sweet this revenge must be for him.

Sorry, babbling -- nicely done!

sammistarr January 30 2009, 01:13:33 UTC

I love your babbling! It made me glow!

Thank you so much for the wonderful comment and for reading.

pearlseed January 28 2009, 02:13:39 UTC

You writ a surprize, not a lovely shiny one, yet definitely notable. You have his voice, his unquenchable spirit and that carries his heart. Good on you. I'm not crying, I got something in my eye.

sammistarr January 30 2009, 01:14:14 UTC

Aww, I'm sorry something got in your eye! *wink*

Thank you for reading and for your delightful comment!