Hope and History - Chapter 7 - Blessed

[sammiifer]

Title: Hope and History - Chapter 7 - Blessed
Author: pinkowitch
Rating: Teen
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Characters and Pairings: Alice/Jasper
Spoilers: Eclipse
Word Count: 2928
Summary: Jasper and Alice leave Philadelphia.
Disclaimer: I don't own these characters, I just play with them. :)
Author’s Notes: This chapter is strongly influenced by a RP

Comments

[sirenprincess]

It never ceases to amaze me how well you understand Jasper. I think you've perfectly captured exactly how he would feel about suddenly having Alice in his life. Also, the way you described Jasper's pain while feeding was heartbreaking.

You know I love it, but I have to say it anyway. Congratulations on another amazing chapter.

[traciaknows]

Oh wow. What beautiful imagery. I can't wait to see what happens next. Peace, Trace

[lys_chan_83]

Breathtaking! Such a beautiful description. I love it. I feel so sad for Jasper and his insecurities. But I love the way you write him. It makes sense. Amazing.

[eyesofgarnet]

Like always...I'm at a loss for words. Its amazing and gets better and better with each chapter.

[thalia_csiny]

Beautifully written as usual. You've written Jasper just perfectly and how he's coping with having Alice in his life, someone so utterly different from his monster life, as he sees it..

Seeing Jasper in pain after he hunted the humans, it was just painful but you wrote it really well. Well done! :D