holidays with the dursley's

[samanthacr]

Ok -- here's my "big" story (4,501 words)... but I think it just might fit as one post... We'll see...

TITLE: holidays with the dursley's
SUMMARY: Ginny invites the Dursley's for Christmas dinner. Harry wonders what he did to deserve this torture.
TIME FRAME: after DH (before epilogue), and Harry and Ginny are married, and James is looking forward to

Comments

[sas33]

oh that was lovely, you had the akwardness down to a tee!

That last line had me laughing out loud, don't you just love the new improved Kreacher.

Just one teeny weeny brit-pick:

She cocked her head at him. “I’m not sore at you; why would you think that?”

We wouldn't say "sore", just mad, angry or annoyed.
So it would read something like:
She cocked her head at him. “I’m not mad with you; why would you think that?”

Hope that helps, and keep them coming - I love your stories!

[samanthacr]

hee hee -- Kreacher just had to make an appearance...

I've made the edit... That was one word that I actually agonized over. Thanks!!!

--scr

[pocketfullof]

Oh, this is just adorable! Really, really good. :D

[samanthacr]

Thank you!!!

[marybongiovi]

Aww, i loved it. Good job! :)

[samanthacr]

Thanks!!!

[emeraldstag]

Great story! That last line with Kreacher really was a wonderful way to end it. XD

[samanthacr]

Thanks!!