Fragments of my Heart 5/?

[sam_theninja24]

Title: Fragments of my Heart
Author: sam_theninja24
Pairing: Onkey
Genre: Romance, drama, supernatural
Rating: R
Summary: When I was assigned to guard the demon Kim Kibum, everything changed. Now, because of him, I’m picking up the fragments of my heart.

Comments

[rinni1905]

Ugh, that Sekyung was so disgusting. Her torturing method is one of the most painful acts that I've ever known. I hope Jinki would be alright, since the would will hurt badly afterwards. So Kibum was controlling Jjong then, thank god, if he hadn't done that, I don't know what would have happened to Jinki, considering that Sekyung was really someone that capable to break anybody.

I was a little bit confused about Minho though, I don't know what he was trying to do, let's see how him and Jinki would do. Gah, this chap is still lacking OnKey a bit. I would love to know more about Onew and Key or how their relationship would develop. Anyway, this chap is really amazing, and I really like it. Hope you could update this soon!

[sam_theninja24]

Yeah, I don't remember where I learned about that method, but I decided it would fit because it was simple and painful.

Sorry that he confused you, he'll be explained later. He's a.. complicated character.

Dang, you beat me to it! Onkey was for the next chapter! >.<

Thanks for reading & commenting!

[melalocket]

omooo jinki T_____________T
i hope he will be fine!!
thanks god kibum hel him....

[sam_theninja24]

He should be okay. lol
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[2ne1generation]

Lol jinki totally forgot about kibum.
Im so curious for the rest T~T

[sam_theninja24]

Yup. He really did.
Next chapter should be here on Wednesday :-)
Thanks for reading & commenting!

[omiichan]

okay the last word from sekyung's POV.. is she.. had she seduce kibum or something like that? she kept mentioning kibum's name..

kibum~ gah~~ so happy that he save his food lol xDD im so waiting for onkey's next scene..~~

and jinki's last thought.. what did he meant, forgot kibum about what~~??

ugh~~ want to see next chap badly >.<~~
but still will be patiently waiting though~~

and explanation about minho too.. (did i smell 2min xD??)

waiting~ ^^

[sam_theninja24]

I crack up every time you call Onew his food :D

He left Key to eat breakfast, remember? And he had a time limit, so he wouldn't leave him alone for a long time (which he has done by talking to Minho, fighting in the lunchroom, & getting tourtured by Sekyung. All have made him stay away from key for an extended period of time)
Does that Help explain it? >.<

Yup, you smell 2min alright. And alotta other couples I wasn't going to have originally o_o

Thanks for reading & commenting! <3

[omiichan]

lol.. xDD

what should i call him?? hes not (yet) kibum's lover now.. so all i could think now is that he's kibum food.. and hey, thats not bad too right?.. or is it?? xP

oh.. yeah, remember now.. and those.. what, like 3 chapters is just telling about couple of hours?? wow, can i expect this will be very long chap~~?? xDD

and the time limit, yeah, just like he had more less time to get some food..

so happy u add 2min here, and tae's really such a baby, he tore the map o.0?!

and so waiting for more couples~~

waiting patiently~
fighting~!! xDD

[adyaby]

omg update!! :D
this is getting more & more interesting!!
sekyung is a *%$#$%^%$#$% here!! >.<
i really don't understand minho xD
i'll wait for more onkey ^^