Writing Meme... Primeval Ficlet

[sallymn]

First done of the ficlet writing prompts I asked for is done!

fredbassett said... Oooh, wow! Primeval, please. Something with Lester and Ryan? Either slash or gen would be lovely. Prompt: "Thank you, captain. Your report was a model of brevity. As was Cutter's. Now tell me what really happened.

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"Thank you, captain. Your report was a model of brevity. As

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[knitekat]

Brilliant. I really, really don't think Lester wants to know, although needs to know maybe. *purrs*

[sallymn]

The amount he doesn't want to know is probably huge... poor man :)

[goldarrow]

OMG That was brilliant!

You have Lester's "voice" down perfectly. I can just see him saying all of that.

And he has been left with a really nasty situation - including the political one.

Loved it.

[sallymn]

Lester is up to finding a way around it. Thank you, the voices are very important to me :)

[wiseheart]

That was great! I love your Lester voice!

[sallymn]

He is fun to write :)

[fredbassett]

"Wonderful. Slimy and it moves, and it has been extinct for 300 million years. For which, I am sure, we are all profoundly grateful.

This is absolutely brilliant!

The voices for the pair of them are totally spot on, I could just hear the total exchange in my head. And I loved Ryan's constant attempts to not swear. *g*

Thank you so much, this made my day!

[sallymn]

Thank you for the prompt, I am so glad you liked it :)

[adafrog]

lol

[sallymn]

:)