[fic] Break the Stallion

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ENTRY 06
TITLE: Break the Stallion
RATING: PG-13
WORD COUNT: 8,114
NOTES: I don't really do first person POV... but hell, I sure tried :)

Comments

[gomushroom]

You sure did! Sure did nail the first POV! XDDD

Impressive AU, and your Jun, oh, your Jun. ♥!

[shirukaze]

Hi there! Thank you very much for commenting~ I'm glad you think so :) Thanks once again^^

[astrangerenters]

I enjoyed the universe of this story, and imagining Sho as a highwayman/criminal (but doing it to help his family!!) was pretty hot.

I also liked how Sho was in denial at first but gradually came around on liking Jun. And maybe I also liked how they kept falling and landing in such compromising positions :)

[shirukaze]

Hey there! I'm glad you liked the setting of this story :) I kinda like the olden times kind of story, see... And yes yes, the compromising positions was totally begging to be put in^^ Thanks for commenting!

[poilouse]

So many feelings... where to start ?
I love this AU, Jun as a rich man, his father being... interesting ;), Sho the robber ( a la Robin Hood). And the Sakumoto, the Sakumoto relationship ! So much love. <3
Thnak you !

[shirukaze]

Hey there~ I'm glad you like this story!^^ Indeed, his father is interesting hehe :3 I've never thought about Sho as Robin Hood before, but that's an interesting viewpoint~ Thank you for commenting!

[harunomasu]

THIS!
This was so perfect and so lovely and so beautiful it makes me feel like I'm reading a Harlequin novel instead of a one-shot story (and the plot is so familiar that I immediately like this story after reading the first sentence). The image of Jun as "Wild Horse" stay with me hours after I read this. I hope this story can win! :D

[shirukaze]

Hehehehe~ I'm sorry I didn't tell you I'm writing for this contest. I'm making it my strict policy >:D Possibly. I really would like to thank you very much for complimenting my fic so much even though you didn't know I wrote it XD I was very flattered~ :3 I'm sorry I didn't win, but I'm really glad I placed at number 2 XD

Thanks a lot, Juu^^!

[harunomasu]

Yeah, that's unfair of you /pouts
Aww, I kind of sad that you didn't win because I really love your fic but well, let's try again next time? :D
I comment on the fic if I think it deserves it. And yours totally deserve a proper reply~ <333

You're welcome, dear~ :D /hugs

[dekkawai]

I love the story ...how Sho could tame Jun ...
and I love JUn's father too... thanks to him Sho and Jun got together :D

[shirukaze]

Hey there~ Thanks for liking the story, and the father lol~ XD