I has a poems~

[sakanda]

My father had to completely snow out on me, since someone called in sick to work, so I was forced to miss my math class for the second week in a row. But whatever - I got to read Loveless.

Aw man, volume 8 of Loveless is seriously like, "OH SNAP." Haha, it's pretty awesome though. Somehow, the art just keeps getting prettier and prettier. AH KIO,

Comments

[nillabunny]

I know! I love Kio!

And I love your poem. It's so pretty. And I love the use of the word plunk. Hehe. And I know you want my favorite part, so this is what it is: Maybe it's gold, or violet, or a dark immersing blue
That contrasts breathtakingly against
Those few, freckling clouds.

Oh, but a couple of nitpicking notes. Both about the same line. In the line "These same feelings of contentment/And emptiness remain exactly the same" you probably shouldn't use "same" twice. Repetitive. Also, contentment and emptiness kind of contradict each other. Did you mean to do that?

But, still, lovely poem. (I felt British using the word 'lovely')

[sakanda]

AHHH KIO YOU GAY HOMO HOMO GAY HOMO ♥

Ahhh, YOU LOVE MY POEM? Ehehe, thanks~ I was outside when I wrote it. THIS REALLY HAPPENED. I ALMOST DIED.

Plunk is a fabulous word.

Aw, I'm glad you like that part~~~ I liked that part too.

Yeah I just reread through this before I read this comment and noticed that. I already changed it. Didn't mean to do that. And yeah, the contentment and emptiness is on purpose.

YEAH THAAANKSSS ♥ ♥ ♥ (how is that british?)

[nillabunny]

Kio is so gay! I love it! It's fabtacular!

And plunk is fabulous.

It just sounded British. They say lovely a lot. And I would know. Since I just finished reading a series of British books for the sixth time. (Although I read the last book twelve times!)

[sakanda]

Why don't you just move to England already.

HE'S A HOMO-MISTRESS. Ahhhhhhhh so gay homo love last few volumes. ♥ Though I can totally support their platonic friendship if that's the case.

Did I ever give you those koixsoubi fics by chaineddove?

[flyingmhe]

Ahhh Loveless one day I must read past volume 2

Your poem is so pretty! I love how it goes from all violent to peaceful and It makes me forget all about the harsh assault
Of rotting apples hanging dormant in laughing trees,
Deviously planning their next attack.

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

[sakanda]

AHHH THAT DAY MUST BE TODAY SO AMAZING AHH AHHH ♥ Did you ever watch the anime? A lot of people don't read the manga because they watched the anime.

AW THAAAANKSSSSSSSS /giddy

I'm so glad you enjoy~~ed it~~ ♥ ♥ ♥