Doc Chicago: Chapter #15

Jan 08, 2014 21:54

Title: Doc Chicago
Author: sajaal
Rating: G to R (just in case)
Characters: Dr. Reid Oliver, Luke Snyder, Holden Snyder, Aaron Snyder, Dr. Bob Hughes, Katie Snyder and a myriad of atwt and original characters
Disclaimer: Not mine, and I really mean no harm and all mistakes are mine.

A/N:  This is partly AU and partly not.  I have to thank ( Read more... )

dr. reid oliver, !author|artist: sajaal, luke snyder, fanfiction, lure

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Intense and wonderful! scotianova January 11 2014, 08:57:48 UTC
Dear,
that was incredibly intense and their bonding ... you see their connection build and grow ...

I am smiling and feeling very content right now! Thank you!

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Re: Intense and wonderful! sajaal January 12 2014, 01:53:37 UTC
My pleasure, mon ami, my pleasure and because I do like to make you smile and feel content I'm posting another chapter for your Sunday enjoyment:-))

I'm enjoying the build as well and I know it's a bit slow but then a slow burn is always good and makes the fire last a lot longer...metaphorically speaking...yes it's been along day up at 5:30 am for hockey practice with the twins...who btw still do the banana dance for me:-))

Thanks as always sweetheart xoxoxoxo!!!!

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sajaal January 13 2014, 21:37:44 UTC
I love throwing Chris in as the bearer of news and a pain in the ass for Reid such fun for me!!! Luke knows that the person Reid originally met was not him and he wants to show who he really is, not necessarily for Reid's benefit but for Luke's benefit and that he's finally doing something for himself. It's funny Luke kinda figures that something's up with Reid and the looks but as usual he doesn't trust himself to think that someone would actually flirt with him as that insecurity rears it's ugly head.

Reid always seemed to tell Luke things that he never tell anyone else, or very few people...he called it the "attack of the nerds" or something like that when he babbled and at these times he always revealed a piece of his past albeit a small one....I just needed to extrapolate it a teensy bit more:-))

Well my dear, I'm happy that you'r enjoying my words and I love when you quote them to me then I know it resonated with you...thanks for you know!!!

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bubbafrogz January 20 2014, 00:00:45 UTC
WOW, an actual civilized chat! With a little flirting! Oh no! The price we pay for extra time. Luke can not catch a break. Depends on the tight space. OH Reid. Must have been fate. I hope telling Casey doesn't bite Luke.

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sajaal January 20 2014, 02:30:42 UTC
Slowly, slowly they move closer to one another and the attraction deepens but it still will need some time for them to understand it and accept it. Casey is Luke's rock in this one and will not be creating any chaos, I'll leave that to someone else:-))

Thanks!!!

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sleeper6 May 26 2014, 00:27:35 UTC
What a great scene in the elevator; loved how you set it up. And I like that Reid was honest and open. Hope it continues!

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sajaal May 26 2014, 01:46:49 UTC
Thank you so very much I always found that the elevator scene was pivotal in the entire relationship and showed Luke how human Reid really was and Reid finally let down those walls for a few moments to let Luke in.

Thanks for catching up my dear I'm a few chapters short of finishing this one so it's nice to read what I wrote 5 months ago!!!

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