You're the Best Thing 32/32

Sep 17, 2013 12:36

Title: You're the Best Thing; 32/32
Author: sajaal
Characters: Dr. Reid Oliver, Luke Snyder, Lucy Montgomery, Bonnie Mckechnie, Jade Taylor, Derek Coburn, Gabriel Caras, Lucinda Walsh, Dr. John Dixon, Dr. Anna Della Croce, Dr. Jean-Paul Benoit, Connor Bailey and Dr. Jasper Tate...and various Oakdalians mentioned.
Rating: Pg13-R,
Disclaimers: Not ( Read more... )

dr. reid oliver, atwt, !author|artist: sajaal, luke snyder, fanfiction, lure

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scotianova September 17 2013, 17:48:06 UTC
A wonderful way to end a wonderful story, giving birth to little...Olivia :)
Despite the beautiful ending I have to say this:

http://www.e-reading-lib.com/illustrations/1010/1010951-_2.jpg

Thank you C. for all this!!!

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sajaal September 18 2013, 00:37:36 UTC
You are so very, very, welcome my dearest Philly, I love writing for you guys as much as myself and I feel all of you are right there with me as I write these stories and it takes it to an entirely different level. I know you have a crush on Jasper which I find absolutely adorable so I will have to visit everyone once in awhile so you can get your Jasper-fix:-))

Bittersweet, I'm almost finished the Epilogue but I'm exhausted tonight so I won't be writing or reading(so you'll have to wait for me to read your next chapter sorry sweetie).

Thanks mon ami! xoxoxoxo

btw, love your picture but I really don't want you to cry...

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shadownyc September 17 2013, 18:26:32 UTC
This was a lovely story! I look forward to the epilogue.

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sajaal September 18 2013, 00:43:52 UTC
Thank you so much, it was stories from you and many of the other writers from those early days or lure atwt that got me started doing this, and for some reason I can't stop. I'm so happy you enjoyed this and have been reading for these past months...it amazes me how long it takes to write and it consumes me for months and now as I keep saying it's hard to say good bye to it.

Thanks:-))

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amyafa September 17 2013, 19:47:07 UTC
What a lot of love in this chapter.

The birth of a new family.
Kind of saw that one coming eventually ;-)

The confessing of love between Jasper and Conner.
Ok not yet to each other.

But I am kind of wondering how our little girl is doing.

I can now do a lovely read from start to finish waiting for the epilogue.

Thank you for yet another great multi chapter fic.

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sajaal September 18 2013, 00:49:23 UTC
Thank you so very much, yes the baby was always going to be born on the train, my first thought was to have them get caught in a freak snowstorm but then it changed and this is what came out instead. Things will be a little clearer in the epilogue but our little one is just fine and so is mommy. I may have to put more angst and some drama in my next story just to give me some balance lol!!!

You are so funny, "now I can do a lovely read from start to finish" thanks sweetie (xoxoxo!!!) and a great big hug too!!!!

You are so very welcome and thank you for reading and commenting....

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kccalgal September 18 2013, 01:13:11 UTC
A nice dramatic entry to the world, how perfect!!!!

As you know I enjoyed the parallels between Luke/Reid and Connor/Jasper throughout the story. I think it was fitting that Luke&Connor and Reid&Jasper had such similar conversations when the secret came out. I am looking forward to the epilogue to wrap up all the other odds and ends.

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sajaal September 19 2013, 00:06:55 UTC
The birth on the train was my first storyline for this fic when I started it oh so long ago but the train would have been stuck in a snow/ice storm and the baby would be delivered, Jasper and Connor weren't in my first storyline. But then the direction changed with the addition of those two, but that baby was still delivered on the train. I could say it was my way of thumbing my nose at the way atwt handled Reid's story....but that might be too deep ( ... )

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kccalgal September 19 2013, 04:35:19 UTC
Looking forward to it!

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sleeper6 September 18 2013, 17:24:13 UTC
Great chapter!

I'm so happy that everything's going good for everyone. Luke and Reid are so happy and in love. Connor and Jasper are happy and in love and hopefully permanent for a long, long time. And Jade had her baby! Good thing doctors were on hand, huh? Hee

Enjoyed this loads!

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sajaal September 19 2013, 00:12:06 UTC
I know an angst-less story, I may have to write a few angst fill one-shots to get it out of my system so I can write another multi-chapter with less but the new one is starting to formulate and perculate in my brain. I've given everyone the HEA they so deserve and I know that's what it is for all of us who hated the way things were handled. It's hard to believe that it was three years ago that the show ended but I don't feel that way because we keep them alive with our stories...so we'll just have to keep them coming:-))

Oh my dear, thank you so very much for being there as well through all of my stories the comments are always so welcome, but I do know that many read and don't comment or comment on the end and I was guilty of that early on too.

Well just the Epilogue to finish and then on to the next but I will take a break for a bit!!

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