A Deal's a Deal: Part V

Nov 22, 2012 21:17


Title: A Deal’s a Deal Part V
Author: sajaal
Characters: Dr. Reid Oliver, Luke Snyder, Casey Hughes, Henry Coleman, Noah Mayer, Katie Snyder mentioning of other ATWT characters and some others that I’ve added for the fun of it.
 Rating: Pg 13-R,

Disclaimers: Not mine I mean no harm.  All mistakes are mine and I apologize for my editing skillsJ

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dr. reid oliver, atwt, !author|artist: sajaal, luke snyder, fanfiction, lure

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sajaal November 23 2012, 21:13:03 UTC
Thank you, I'm trying to add a little more to the original without straying to far off (LOL)and I'm happy to hear that you're enjoying it:))

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scotianova November 23 2012, 08:06:10 UTC
So much fun!

“Jealous?” he asked instead, “Did you want to ask Jessy out yourself? I guess you’re a little closer in age.”

Good move, Luke!

I like rereading canon parts but your twists are that extra something!

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sajaal November 23 2012, 21:14:45 UTC
Thank you so much too, I'm trying and it's a little daunting to say the least to keep the storyline intact and add my two-bits worth to change things up LOL!!

Thanks P, as always:))

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kccalgal November 24 2012, 05:17:01 UTC
No Luke, Don't go to your mom's house. Follow Reid all over town and pester him until he gives you answers!

Loved the bookstore and after interaction. Lots of good one liners. Great work.

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sajaal November 25 2012, 02:52:45 UTC
Uh, uh, uh....remember who's at his mom's house...this is one of those pivotal points when Noah drops his cane and Luke goes and helps him...next chapter LOL!!

Thanks so much for reading and the great comments:))

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sleeper6 November 24 2012, 05:28:35 UTC
Oh, guys, you know you want each other! The sexual tension is high and sizzling! I like this story very much. :)

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sajaal November 25 2012, 02:54:19 UTC
And as we know it just gets hotter and hotter as they deny how they feel...I'll have to think of something creative when they finally reach that boiling point LOL!!

So happy you're enjoying this thanks for reading and commenting:))

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ext_1190928 November 24 2012, 12:52:04 UTC
Oh the angst!!!

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sajaal November 25 2012, 02:49:49 UTC
Yep, and as you know it will get better and better as we go and that UST just gets bigger and bigger...I'll try to give you an idea of what they are not saying and showing with body language..Enjoy!!!

As always thanks for reading and commenting:))

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