Older Ghosts, Gojyo, G AND Ghosts of the Past, Gojyo and Hakkai, G

[kubaru_suki]

Title: Older Ghosts
Author: Kubaru Suki
Prompt: #7, Ghosts
Time: 16:16

Author's Note: Yeah. I don't know what's up with it either. In my own defense, I've been writing JE boyband fic while I've been gone. I think that counts for something.

Comments

[lillypuff]

I really liked both of these =) The second one made me all kinds of giddy.

[rasphigi]

Oooh, I like the second one. Of course Gojyo doesn't really know what's going on, but what the hell, let's get these boys some drinks, right? XD Much love for first squadron.
I like the first one too... the jagged rhythm of it seems very appropriate. "Walking on eggshells." (Heh, Hakkai comes pre-ghostified; that's convenient ^__~)

I wouldn't have guessed the author of these was braindead. Makes me want to see you at the top of your game, heheh ♥

[erinmacha]

:) I liked both of these. I really, REALLY liked the second one though. Including the first squadron was a great idea. :)

[louiselux]

The first one was interesting, and I like that I felt I was directly in Gojyo's brain, although I think the style distracted me in the end from the content.

The whole concept of the second one is so great.

First Squadron, Gojyo discovers, is thrilled to meet Hakkai.

Yes, I bet they are! I'd love to see this story idea developed into something longer too, because it's so fascinating.

[lauand]

I really liked both. The first one because it's heartwrenching and Gojyo-ish and the last line just killed me. The second one because the idea is wonderful and original. I must confess that I'm not totally comfortable with the idea of the squadron helping in the final battle, but putting the Gaiden soldiers into the story and how Gojyo, Hakkai and them react to each other is just awesome.